I completely agree, the author doesn't resolve any plot threads and just keeps adding more. Besides, Jasmine doesn't exactly "grow" as a main character. I understand you want to make money, but you make your characters seem basic and silly. At this point, many of the plot lines should have been resolved: Does Erik choose Fiona or will he remain a coward? Will Xaden finally see his sister for who she really is and retaliate? Do Xaden and Jasmine want to be together, do they love each other? Is Cherry's infidelity with the king revealed? Does the queen realize what her sister is really like? That one daughter killed the other? Who is Jasmine's father? What about the world the alpha hunter went to, and do they want Jasmine? And so on and so forth...
I like the story, but it progresses very slowly. It seems like the author wants to delay resolving issues. Everything is always going wrong for Jasmine. You say things will get better, but I honestly don't see that happening. I think by chapter 600, she should have already started resolving plot lines. For example, decide if Xaden and Jasmine are together. It's time to move forward. It seems like you enjoy seeing your main character constantly suffering.
its always the same, someone those something to make Jasmine guilty, then someone helps her, does she a baby o has character to defend herself?... And Jasmine dont grow Up, she is being attacked and shes not leaving? same istory different pack ... I mean the characters are stupid ore they dont see what they have around? and also i dont understand what is the sence of Jasmine no speaking of what she saws and the bad things others make to her... She doesnt say whats going on and two pleople defend her? arenthey mind readers?
The Alpha’s Unwanted Bride
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