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I mean i think it depends on how you would view it, we know that Zephyr protested Whitebeard JR. joining, them still doing it and ingnoring him can be seen as forcing him out.
In the distance, Ain bit her lip, tears welling up in her eyes. Since Zephyr was kicked out of the navy, they had entered their darkest period. Betrayed, isolated, and devastated. The world seemed dim and lifeless. At the brink of despair, Lin Yan appeared and opened a door for them. Amidst the dawn's light, he pulled them from the depths of despair. Thinking of this, Ain couldn't stop her tears. Finally, someone was willing to speak for them!
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Also in all honesty I am not 100% sure what attack Garp used, but the description only matched up with Galaxy Impact which is why I choose that, the literal translation would have been something like Bone Fist, which is not something he uses. Other then that he has no Attack that he calls out that is a pure punch, everything else is either a gag (Fists of Love) or does something else.
Similarly, Garp landed on the ground. He clapped his hands, making a dull sound. "You can block my Galaxy Impact? I must admit, you have some strength! But if you Whitebeard Pirates want to rescue Ace, you have to get through me first!"
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Shown up as shown what he is really capable off.
The key point was, their 17th Division captain hadn't even shown up yet! What kind of division was this 17th Division?
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Yeah but Akainu was not really hurt just humiliated.
"Quite confident, aren't you!" Kizaru was unconcerned. He didn't deny Issho's strength, but he didn't think there was another strong individual in the 17th Division comparable to Issho. After all, Kizaru didn't consider Lin Yan and Zephyr as significant threats! As for this man with green hair... Sorry. He didn't recognize him!
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Nah it was Marco, a few chapters ago Marco kicked Kizaru away.
With Kizaru joining the fight, the Navy felt increasingly confident! As long as two Admirals acted together, the Navy was invincible! However, before they could feel excited about Kizaru's entrance, in just a few seconds, their Navy Admiral Kizaru was sent flying again! First, it was Marco, now it was this man with green hair.
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Its a Translation so I have no real Influence over how this goes.
"Who wouldn't…" Lin Yan admitted, though Shakky, standing beside him, kicked him to change his tone. "Ah, no, Admiral, what do you suggest?"
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Aramaki was near Wano
Lin Yan's crew, despite being in Beast Pirate territory, hadn't expected to encounter Drought Jack, notorious for his billion-bounty. The tension rose as they discussed their options. Zephyr sighed, feeling the generational gap, as his younger comrades casually equated Jack to the fearsome Emperor Kaido. If confrontation was inevitable, they seemed almost nonchalant about the prospect.
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Thank you, fixed
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All i can tell you that as of now, that whole Chapter is 100% the same as the original, all the extra Contend ChatGPT added is gone, and I even looken up the RAW again. (Other then me changing Names to stay consistent since Author is constantly jumping between calling Admirals by their real Name and then their Codename)
ch 70 Chapter 70: The Whitebeard Pirates' Last Stand (Fixed)
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Fixed, it seems chatgpt while rewriting my draft added things to the middle of the chapter. Causing Ace, Crocodile Jinbei etc. to appear.
ch 70 Chapter 70: The Whitebeard Pirates' Last Stand (Fixed)
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Hmm, I went by the estimation made by comparing Narutos height to kurama, since we know Narutos exact height at the time. That would come out to about 60m for Kurame. Also the Marine warships are massive, its just never really shown. Remember this picture? https://static.wikia.nocookie.net/onepiece/images/2/2e/Buster_Call_Arrives.png/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/1000?cb=20230209162129 Compare the size of the ships that are further away to the buildings.
"Next stop, Marineford!" The three warships set sail, with Impel Down slowly fading from their sight!
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I mean its 3 Marine Warships not just one. Also Ships are way bigger the Gyuki. Like ships are massive compared to any Biju, prob around 3 times the Height/Length.
"Next stop, Marineford!" The three warships set sail, with Impel Down slowly fading from their sight!
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Pretty sure not even Kamui can transport that many people at once.
"Next stop, Marineford!" The three warships set sail, with Impel Down slowly fading from their sight!
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Huh?
"Congratulations, Host! You've acquired the Mangekyō Sharingan (Obito version)!"
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Yeah, sadly nearly every Chinese Fanfic will have things like that.
"Weren't you Long Aotian? Weren't you launching into the fray? Weren't you peerless?"
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Just a few more Chapters then the payoff will happen
ch 66 Chapter 66: The Strongest Warden, Magellan
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He was in the New World without any naviganitional knowledge, how was he supposed to turn in the head of that guy? Its not like decay does not exist, not to mention New World Marines are not as widespread as in the other parts of the world.
He had empty pockets and bare sleeves, without a penny to his name. He was so poor that an elderly woman came knocking on his door in the middle of the night, complaining that he was disturbing their rest.
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He needs to sit and actually fish.
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: The Rumble-Rumble Fruit and the Mangekyo Sharingan
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I mean at least he only stole her jewlery (Story was also written before her age was ever confirmed)
"Bad luck!" Lin Yan muttered, displeased. She had tricked him, and he had planned to extort her to comfort his young soul. Instead, he got into trouble. Seeing no advantage to be gained, he turned to leave. But after a few steps, Lin Yan stopped and looked back at the unconscious Bonnie. Just leaving her there felt inappropriate. His kind heart was moved, and he decided to help her a little.
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It also copies physical skills (as shown when Sasuke copies part of Lee's Taijutsu), so there is stuff to copy.
Not to mention the Mangekyō Sharingan beside it — and it's the Obito version, offering abilities like copying, Kamui, and Susanoo!
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