Webnovel Author: LordValmar - Fanfic Collection

Cover 2: Personally I rather like this one because he has that chi glow effect going on. But both are nice, imo.

I'd go for the cosmic storm. I admit I'm not that knowledgeable about the lore, but from what I recall everyone who got hit by it did get some pretty sweet powers with minimum downsides. Well, other than Ben being stuck in that form... but I also recall it being possible for him to change back, at least in some versions. So I'm sure even if they got a power that changed in them in a way they didn't like, Peter and Gwen could come up with a solution. Overall just seems like a relatively easy and safe way to get powers that are likely to be in the higher tiers. Though downside is that it'll likely become more public knowledge that they have powers if they were to follow the Baxter team.

Anyone know the title of the original novel?

I wonder if anyone would wrongfully connect him to Big Mom because his name is Lin. Since her name is Linlin and Lin itself is, far as I know, not a typical name in One Piece.

How does this "Fishing" system work, exactly? Is it just a figurative thing or does he have to literally, physically fish for it to count? Like, can he be "fishing" that day while still doing other things? Is it a automatic background progress? I'm just wondering why he spent the whole year seemingly doing nothing notable or worthwhile other than "fishing", which makes me assume the fishing has some activity or action to it that he has to do.

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Dear author, in case you were interested, I made three quick covers for your story to give it a little more flair. I could edit them up more if one catches your eye but want a change like font color or whatever. Anyway, use at your leisure. Cover 1:

Was there always a system and I just glossed over it?

Wait is the movie he's talking about this whole time Pulp Fiction?

Translation. How well it is, I can't really say. I've only just found the original. He makes some corrections at least. Like he calls Pepper by the right name instead of "Little Chili" like machine translations want to do. But at the same time, he never got Shredder right. Lol Anyway! The name of it is Marvel: Fusion. You can find a machine translation at mtlnovel if you're interested.

A good chapter but wow it was short. It felt like half the chapter was spent reiterating that he could have saved civilians, but didn't. Literally its repeated so many times at the start with just different flavor text, all essentially saying the same thing. This entire chapter was basically one minute of dialogue.

Personally, this is perhaps one of the weakest chapters. Feels like it was just a brief lewd, system stats and excuse to rewrite world to handwave harems being a socially accepted thing. Not saying any of that is bad, just that it didn't feel like much really happened.

If you wanted a reason to break them up, you could just have her end it by dating some actor or being caught sleeping with some casting director or something. You know, the common practice stuff that was rampant in hollywood at the time. Bringing in the mother and drama with it... I mean, it isn't bad, but you have a history of being really heavy-handed when dealing with personal drama where you amplify the antagonists flaws and faults to insane degrees to make it so incredibly one-sided that its almost impossible to feel even the slightest sympathy for anyone not Kazir. Like with his ex wife, where her only defining characteristics seemed to be crafted solely to be as horrible a person as possible.

My only complaint is Amazo. MC decides to adopt him and then tosses him in jail. We never see or hear about him again for several chapters, seemingly forgotten, but now he shows up again like its a casual thing. I hope the MC has been interacting with him regularly up to this point.