A man who got ambitions to be a full writer. Even got job in Hospitality.
2018-10-20 Joined Global
Nah. just been a while since i was silent reader and didn't give so much about review. and this is the first time i give review to someone in global (usually, i read a lot in indonesian language. and always give some feedback)
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The quality of writing is good. Easy to read and make story interesting. At first, i thought gonna be overpowered. turns out i was wrong since mc needs effort from weak into strong. Also, pacing is good and worldbuilding needs to improve. But as reader, i like it. Keep it work
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I see. I'll considering your feedback next time. thanks for your feedback
ch 0 6 Chapter 06
Fantasy · Dimas_Pratama
thanks for feedback.
ch 0 6 Chapter 06
Fantasy · Dimas_Pratama
thanks for giving review honestly. actually, I made stories to focus on 4 main characters, and each character trying to build up into good development, to make character feels insecure when they got similar situation in real life. and yes, I made complex stories to make interesting and feel sympathy for character (though I admit, some of them kinda messy) anyway, thank you again[img=recommend]
ch 0 6 Chapter 06
Fantasy · Dimas_Pratama
thank you for your coming and give the review
Thank you for giving the review.
thank you for review
Thanks for critique. Actually i want to use consistent such as hiro and allen as he. while Yumi and Rina as She. Anyway thanks again for correction
Another World Chronicles
Fantasy · Dimas_Pratama