Webnovel Author: ForgottenHope - Fanfic Collection

Just read your story and caught up, been really good so far but I just have one question. Why is there a harem tag on this book when it's already 70 chapters in and not a tiny chance of a love interest and I don't think that pink teddy bear girl counts cuss, he didn't even have the slightest thoughts of her that way. I like the story but he just seems too robotic once he got stronger, it's always profit this profit that. it's fair I guess because the apocalypse and all but it just feels like it's starting to get stale with only profit going through his head.

didn't they make a comic of how unbelievably hard it was for Peter to resist silk.

I guess you're right, I'm just gonna have to trust the process.

That's what most authors on the fanfic side do. They push a lot of filler chaps so they can advertise their Ptron and say that they got a lot of chapters on there. kinda hard to tell which author cares about 'story' when they all advertise their Ptron and try to make a quick buck.

just replied to guy, i guess that goes for you too cuss ain't typing that all over again lol.

gotta increase the word count and add filler chaps too I guess, but not exactly interesting seeing a grown man play knight with a wooden sword if you see it from my perspective.

I thought he was gonna conquer the world not play adventure. Would have been more satisfying seeing him commanding armies and making the queen or princess or important female characters beg for more(if you know what I am talking about) like he did to Enri the village girl.

this is fking awful the fact that he took Beatrice after all she's done. Man I thought this book would get better in future chaps, but no this stays hot fking garbage. The thing i like though is that I get to find out how much of a dumpster fire this book is through the free chaps and i didn't have to pay to find out later down the line.