I have read ALOT... Now attempting a book, give it a read and tear me a new one with criticism
2019-02-16 Joined United States
Shen Boa doin some experiments…. ☠️
ch 735 Bio-Warfare
Eastern · Biako
Do you work a day job? Why writing on 30min of sleep?
ch 735 Bio-Warfare
Eastern · Biako
She just runs around playing pranks on other ants 🐜. She has a partner named MiscreANT
"You weren't worried his antics would scare people off instead?"
Fantasy · RinoZ
Just wait till the champion class ant 🐜 MERCH-ANT 🐜 is born, the Brathian will know true terror! Anthony- ‘Down, dark one down!’
"I'd rather forget about that, if I'm being honest."
Fantasy · RinoZ
Centimeters? I don’t get the joke or comment at all
By the time they reached this destination, the final and most critical of the trip, word of mouth had done the advertising for them! The crowds around Anthony weren't just there to see a powerful monster up close, they wanted to see the monster who'd done such damage to Greystone, out-pettied the Magpei, and gone undefeated amongst the Folk.
Fantasy · RinoZ
🐜 Ant-ics hehe 🐜
"You weren't worried his antics would scare people off instead?"
Fantasy · RinoZ
"I'll always be there for you," Monica gasped, closing her eyes and throwing her head back. "I'll watch humankind acknowledge your power and bow to you."
Fantasy · Eveofchaos
My point is, he’s the head of the tower. The thing protecting the biggest and best city of humans
ch 1223 Chapter 1336 - Anthony On Tour - A Wizard is Never Late, But They Do Yap Too Much
Fantasy · RinoZ
I imagine the mage is hella strong, like teir 9 strong as those creatures can exist in this layer of the dungeon. So Anthony is like a mild fascination to him, no threat at all
ch 1223 Chapter 1336 - Anthony On Tour - A Wizard is Never Late, But They Do Yap Too Much
Fantasy · RinoZ
Damn, $600 for a month isn’t great. Do what you have to do, but I’d hope the max priv price doesn’t change much. I’m assuming your just changing the pricing per chapter and the lower priv pricing? Since you signed the Webnovel contract not sure what you can do for marketing it. But see if you can work with them to post the free chapters on other sites as well, hopefully to generate enough intrest that they follow the rest at Webnovel. Not sure how crazy the contract is, but moving the first couple arcs to Amazon Audio Books could be great to increase sales. I believe they had partnered with them for a diff book before. Maybe bring back the pat**on as well. Dont offer the chapters there since I know your not allowed. But offer other incentives like possible the following: - join an exclusive discord - free custom t-shirt after X-months of subbing and total donated. - 1 on 1 session with you to discus ideas - ability to name a background character (within reason, can’t have ppl names ‘ButtDoom69’ lol) Crazy option would be to work with another person on another book project. They come up with the ideas, you can modify to an extent. Then your just filling in the blanks. Might save a ton of time thinking of the world building, characters, plot, ect… - If this is interesting, make sure to start with a shorter book so your not locked in if it turns out badly. Idk hope this helps. But we love ya Baiko so good luck man.
ch 730 An Impossible Foe
Eastern · Biako
Then, the structure began to cave in, almost imploding on itself. Its surfaces bent and broke, crushing the innermost areas. The process continued even when Khan stepped into the universe protected by a mana barrier. He reached his ship just in time to watch the space station explode from the scanners.
Fantasy · Eveofchaos
So much alien (xenomorph) vibes in this arc…
ch 729 Enemy At The Gate
Eastern · Biako
Nothing to see here…
Though we hid behind the boxes, we weren't too deep in the dark alley. But we were closer to the Rakshasa and the entrance and behind the closest boxes to the entrance.
Eastern · Biako
Khan stopped advancing when he entered the lab. The atmosphere was clearly different, but that wouldn't have been enough to slow him down. Yet, spotting Margaret and one of Baoway's blue bushes on the desk beside her could.
Fantasy · Eveofchaos
My Lin should look like a fetus lol
Of course, this was just their appearance, and their true age was a thousand times more considering they were all immortals!
Eastern · Grand_Void_Daoist
Put it in the ring filled with space qi?
"It seems to be able to absorb energy passively on its own." Lin Mu stated. "I can also charge it with Spatial Qi, but the sheer amount needed is way beyond what I can control now." He added.
Eastern · Grand_Void_Daoist
I think it said they stole the laws from the world. And if that’s right, then each world/dimensional plane host their own laws. Heaven can’t find them to punish them since everything would appear fine since the tampering with the law wouldn’t be noticed since it no longer exists within that worlds system? Just theorizing
I couldn't give a proper answer to this question so I just stopped thinking about it. The Bastion itself was feeding off the Lightning strikes, no wonder it retained its functionality for so long even without Soul Power.
Poison God's Heritage
Eastern · Biako