Webnovel Author: Lunaprate - Novel Collection

All right. In short, this novel, at least as of chapter 50, has been wonderful. The writing style of the author is fantastic. It draws you in to read more and more chapters. While at times there are some awkward sentences, it does not distract you from the overall meaning. The grammar is also solid. The development of the story is well done as well. All the chapters seem to move the plot forward without meaningless interactions for the most part. The only thing in my opinion that could use some work is character design. I'm still uncertain as I did not read the rest of the story, but as of the 50th chapter, I find some of the characters a little weak. Don't get me wrong, the main character is very interesting, their personality is quite unique and deep; however, the other characters do not feel as complex. They feel a bit shallow, as if they're just there for the protagonist to develop further and that is all. The setting of the novel is lovely as well. The geopolitics of the world is well thought of and interesting for the most part. Overall, this story is definitely worth checking out. It leaves you wanting to read more chapters!