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don_offl
male LV 3Author of Rise of the Legendary Emperor, Hitman with a Badass System & Anti Hero with a Symbiote System. Bringing stories to life and living through my characters.
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Update: Fixed the chapter and rewrote it completely. Please let me know how the chapter reads now
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Hitman with a Badass System
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Hi, I noticed that but those chapters were written during when i had covid so i messed up pretty bad. But the upcoming chapters have been edited and you can see the difference
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Thank you so much daoist
ch 1240 Noah’s Preparation For The Second Round
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Thank you so much Ash
ch 0 1 Love and Betrayal
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You can always join my discord and talk to me there!!
Hi, I will do another edit. But i can assure you the later chapters have little to no mistakes
ch 0 1 The Rise of an Anti Hero
Anti Hero with a Symbiote System
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I can understand why you feel like that. And to be honest, i have mentioned in the chapter how Victoria's behaviour surprised Draven. There is a good reason why she attacked him, if you have read Moonblade arc, you might have guessed why
"I don't have time for this. Get out of my way," Draven snapped, his patience waning as the urgency of his mission pressed upon him.
Anti Hero with a Symbiote System
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Thank you atlas. I have fixed the mistakes. Thank you again for taking the time to read my book
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Just give it a go and read a few more chapters...you might want to stick around when he breaks out the prison
Draven tried to communicate with his khal, hoping it was still inside his ear and could help him contact Sarah. However, his fears were confirmed when he realized the soldiers had confiscated his communication device. He was now trapped in the most secure prison in Stegia, powerless and alone.
Anti Hero with a Symbiote System
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No. The System and Margoth is different entities. And the MC will be in control. dont worry.
ch 0 3 Margoth, the Elden God
Anti Hero with a Symbiote System
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Yes, glad you noticed it
ch 12 Ghost healing potion
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hello
"They're close" When he peeked at the visuals being captured by the drone, he noticed the crocks getting closer and closer. Although he still looked calm, he was pretty serious about the upcoming battle.
Hitman with a Badass System
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If you dont interact with your reader, you can never be a better writer imo. that is why i always read all the comments and respond to them as much as i can
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You will see what happened in 2 chapters
ch 1038 What Really Happened? Part Two
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you just have to wait 2 chapters, not 300. I wrote long chapters bcz if i wrote short chapters, it will make u spend more coins until the MC appears. that is why i wrote long chapters when the MC is not in the chapter so u can get it over with in one single chapter
ch 1037 What Really Happened? Part One
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It should have been Noah's plan. Edited it
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lol a funny mistake,it should be Gaya
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it was a mistake. Updated the chapter. Please make sure to read it. Sorry for the mistake
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She is not strong as Ghost, he is just holding back...way back...if he went for the kill, she would have died in few seconds
ch 1278 Ancient God's Blood
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