Webnovel Author: VisualKoFey - Novel Collection

2yr

Replied to AbysallNight

I'm sorry but I went the slow way and he has changed after the current events up until the last chapter I released today. I tried to make it to be a bit relistic but it ended up being a little bit drawn out.

ch 0 3 Know the truth

Summoned and Unwanted

Fantasy · VisualKoFey

VisualKoFey

2yr

Replied to DaoistorA7EW

Thank you. I appreciate your help. I fixed the error, and I don't have an editor. I use Grammarly for spelling mistakes and stuff like that. It didn't show as an error, so I thought it was fine. English isn't my primary language.

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Summoned and Unwanted

Fantasy · VisualKoFey

VisualKoFey

2yr

Replied to 6_Void_King_9

I made the MC as a growth-type character with two powers. A mysterious hero power and a boost-type mutation power. The more he experiences and connections he makes, the stronger he becomes.

ch 17 Beast vs Monster. One predator can live.

Summoned and Unwanted

Fantasy · VisualKoFey

VisualKoFey

2yr

Replied to Viduus

You are correct, but I am showing the story of the MC in the new world and not if or went he goes back to Earth with the book now working differently after Kevin, the writer of the book dies. The MC might appearance a change in the time difference in both worlds. I hope this can help you understand from my perspective of the storytelling.

ch 0 4 Lost and Found

Summoned and Unwanted

Fantasy · VisualKoFey

VisualKoFey

2yr

Posted

I read eight chapters but I can say that this is a great story of witches showing the past to the next generation witch to take revenge for them. However, they forget that the MC isn't a tool, but a living being. The story has a great potential, keep it up.

LOVE; A CURSE OR BLESSING

Teen · Debbiejay

VisualKoFey

2yr

Replied to Sagely_pervert

Oh he will.

ch 20 The three share their past

Summoned and Unwanted

Fantasy · VisualKoFey

VisualKoFey

2yr

Replied to ItBeLikeThat

All he knows is that he should be able to transfer back after a hundred years and that the book doesn't say what happens after that. But he is forgetting how the book is also working differently as well since he was summoned earlier than those before him.

Vincent closed his eyes and wished for all days to be filled without worry and enjoy his hundred years in this world with Ester, Lupa, and Kazumi.

Summoned and Unwanted

Fantasy · VisualKoFey

VisualKoFey

2yr

Posted

The story has a good start with all the details needed to help the reader understand what is happening and what her personality is like. The writing is good, well placed, and easy to read. I recommend anyone stumbling on this story to give it a go.

Princess of the Silver Ocean

Fantasy · Ice_Princesss

VisualKoFey

2yr

Posted

I read a few chapters and I say it has a good start. The two characters have a good synergy yet they feel far and different enough to learn something from each other. I recommend this and hope the best it can evolve into a fantastic story. Keep it up.

Summoning a Wicked Wizard

Fantasy · uhjuihoijio

VisualKoFey

2yr

Posted

A good start so far. I hope the story can focus more on what the MC is doing as it can help readers understand better what is happening around the MC, but other than that, the story makes you want to know what is going to happen next. Overall, I recommend anyone finding this story to take their time and give this story a go.

Transmigrated into a Novel: Payne Gale, The Villain's Spouse

Fantasy · authortinnnnn

VisualKoFey

2yr

Replied to ItBeLikeThat

The mark that can't be removed the one of the ways for him to get discovered.

"Ok, ok, I will talk. But first promise me that you will sit down and lower your knife. Then I will answer all your questions." Vincent looked at Ester, mustered what little courage this rejection built up.

Summoned and Unwanted

Fantasy · VisualKoFey

VisualKoFey

2yr

Replied to ItBeLikeThat

Yes, he starts as a naive person until he understands he needs to change.

To him, Ester didn't appear the type to trick others since she kept her emotions on her sleeve. They were too real to be called an act, and she felt like a naive girl as well.

Summoned and Unwanted

Fantasy · VisualKoFey

VisualKoFey

2yr

Replied to ItBeLikeThat

That is the MC Vincent's assumption. 100 years and return back to Earth. But as the book mentions nothing after it happens, he can only hope.

ch 0 3 Know the truth

Summoned and Unwanted

Fantasy · VisualKoFey

VisualKoFey

2yr

Replied to Little_Foxxy

Thank you.

Summoned and Unwanted

Fantasy · VisualKoFey

VisualKoFey

2yr

Posted

I hope readers of this story enjoy the journey as I do while constantly evolving the story based on the character's personalities. Something about this story. Harem tag is more like teammates rather than the eye candy type, and this tag will make sense later in the story. Romance tag is to show the interaction with the characters rather than "Hi." and "You're in." If you have any questions that aren't considered spoilers, I will try to answer them. Thank you, and have a great day.

Summoned and Unwanted

Fantasy · VisualKoFey

VisualKoFey

2yr

Replied to Ricko_wijaya

No, the boar's leg is injured. That's why to use all its strength to remove its tusk from the tree it has to use its injured leg with the pain it brings along.

The boar squealed while it furiously shook its head. It tried to unstuck its tusk while immeasurable pain shot from its leg. The boar did its best while contorting its face in pain and anger.

Summoned and Unwanted

Fantasy · VisualKoFey

VisualKoFey

2yr

Replied to NaTaS_2951

Yes. At the start, I left everything as healthy but now will start addressing them differently. I'm thinking of leaving it like this to let his ability be as basic as possible for now.

[Condition] Healthy