An Anti-Hero doesn't mean being a villain.
2019-09-14 Joined Global
Okay, quick review, this story really intrigue, especially the plot. Very simple, no complex words for to understand, and overall, this is an amazing book for someone who love sci-fi and military like. Gotta love it.Git gud for the writer
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Bonus fact about Osamu's family: After the war, as Akemi and Osamu were already married, they already had children. Yet, some events happened that made that family separation in different ways. So, before they separate, Osamu gave his family an eternal spirit, where they cannot be killed, cannot turn old until they met once again. It happened after the fallen of the Demon lord Festival, where Commander Suzuki and Commander Kaneki were.
ch 25 Chapter 25: Tarnish One
Fantasy · AntiHero874
thanks for your comment of my work, I'm well aware of your criticism and i understand why. However, this is the first work i ever made, so there's no wonder i had some amature mistakes. I will look forward of my details and I'm sure I'll fix my work. Thanks.
I, Takeru Suzuki, a mature teenager and living a peaceful life since the last war in the year 1945, where Hiroshima and Kyoto were attacked by other nations and during that time, our empire was rising, conquering almost the whole Asian-Pacific Ocean. My father was once a soldier at that time and sacrificed his life, bringing glory to their nation and honor. At the time I was still inside in my mother's womb. After days passed, the atmosphere changed. A lot of inventions were created, scholarships, and wise leaders were born. After the war, I was born.
Fantasy · AntiHero874
TBH, you have no prob with your storylines, your grammar is good, and you mention the background of the world. There's nothing to criticize, however, I still need to see where it goes next in the future update. Keep it up.
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When it comes to Fantasy, nothing goes wrong, and as for this, I say the writing is creative. Me personally could only think one, an interesting story. Git gud for the writer.