Honestly, I frequently reading Manga's than novel, so there is a lot more conversation than narrative in my writings. Hope you like it! Ig account promote: @ssun_ara
2019-09-20 Joined Indonesia
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"I curse you and all your decedents. You shall all have small penises for this."
Fantasy · Excelsior_x
*cries*
"You know, the way you sleep, I could steal everything in your house and set the house on fire. I am sure you would die still asleep while the fire burnt you alive."
Fantasy · Excelsior_x
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon
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Urban · ssun_ara
thanks for the review 😘
Okay, I'll work on this. Thank you so much for the feedback
When people listen to music concerning justification and mistones, Krei gets information straight to her brain. Krei has difficulty controlling the information that comes to her from every melody she hears. For a few months, she always closed her ears wherever she went. Until finally she found several cases of people dealing with themselves due to very sensitive hearing levels. Such as, perform surgery to meditate. Krei read a variety of research.
Sci-fi · ssun_ara
This novel really had great potential. I am also an author and this is a bit familiar with the story I recently worked on but this story had more conflict and intensity. Which is very good and interesting. I can easily imagine the conflict through the writing which is very helpful for me who is a fast reader. Keep up the good work!
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Thank you! I'll update more chapter soon!
ALL TRUE !!!
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Book&Literature · Soft_heart
I can see this story is giving a kind of mystery like a scattered puzzle that eventually readers need to find the exact place and that is how you write a mystery! The author has done a great job. Grammatical errors are fine as long as it's understandable for the story. I've done a lot too and learned from that experience. I hope you keep updated on this novel and reached the top! *added to fav
Martyr The Devourer Of Wands
Fantasy · Excelsior_x