Webnovel Author: theblocshop - Novel Collection

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3yr

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An arsed book unfortunately. In all seriousness I just couldn't get passed "arsed" in every other paragraph. Extrenely repeated words are jarring and moreso uncommom ones. I liked where it was going but it was to annoying to read.

Veiled Saga: Conquest and Domination

War · Suezaro

theblocshop

3yr

Commented

I think it would be great if you avoided sound affects and instead described them

TAATATATAAA!!! {SFX: paws beating on the lightly snowed ground}.

EVOLUTION: CONQUEROR

Fantasy · Daoist_Xuyi

theblocshop

3yr

Commented

For a room to yourself, that is still very bbry comfortable. 49sqm is around 500sqft!

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The Great Demon System

Fantasy · Drip