Webnovel Author: CorvinCorvus - Novel Collection

Perfect!! Will start it from the beginning, just to change my own image of the MC in my head. 👍🏾

I plan to to stick with it, I like the concept, it’ just the refusing advice and choosing death, yet getting angry at your saviour makes the MC look a bit bipolar. If there was no advice from the system, and he tried with all his might but failed and then get saved, that would make more sense. Or if he actually listened to the system and had a chance at winning before she stepped in and ”saved” him, then his anger would be justified.

Shameless Author here, first time publishing! It’s an epic adventure and I’m sure you will all love it. It’s a dark and twisted story about life constantly beating one down, and his journey to basically destroy it all.

As I’m writing this morning have only made through 6 chapters. I’m really trying to stick with it, but the MC seems soo bipolar that I’m having a hard time getting past it. The system tells him how to equip his class and weapons, but he chooses to pick up a brick to throw at the monster….. The story starts with him playing a game, trying to show he is a seasoned gamer, even had his loot stolen because he was too slow, and then when he defeats a monster and loot drops he asked the system what good is this loot? You just killed your first monster!! Loot is loot! Oh and then 2 months later his chatting with his system, trying to show us he is pro at this now The system calls him “master” and he asks the system to show him his status… “Yo system show me my status pronto…” Okay cool thanks for showing that he is a pro now, then the next moment he is fighting a monster, he sees the monster is getting closer but doesn’t move like his class “Assasin” Instead he decides to stand and hold out his arms and cast a shield spell… his “Mana” or energy is being drained, the system continuously asks if he should use his ability but he refuses saying his got this, he will do it on his own… But he just stands there until his Mana is depleted….didn’t even doge or try to circle it. Just remained there with his blue scarf fluttering in the wind…but luckily when his shield was dispelled die to lack of Mana a young heroin comes and saves him and the leaves. The MC is then there calling out her name like he knows her, just watch me so and so I shall prove to you that I am going to be someone. You don’t know her, she doesn’t know you, she didn’t insult you, she saved your life… it wasn’t like you had a fighting chance… you were going to commit suicide refusing to listen to your system that calls you Master… I can’t tell if he is mentally unstable or just mental…

Book seems decent enough but the more you read the more holes appear in the plot. The author will set a rule for his system - Only the one who kills the monster can touch it and turn it into a card, then the next chapter the MC will turn every monster that he didn’t Kill into a card. Pronouns don’t exist in this book, everyone’s Geneder fluid, she will be he so you just have to keep context in mind while reading. Character development is by far the worst thing about this book. The Author just expects because this is the MC than everything and everyone is weaker and dumber than he is. This female character Is the strongest in the whole school, MC is one of the weakest, Master tells MC put a collar on her Next chapter despite the level and strength gap, he controlls her. Somehow everyone who is stronger than him and more experienced in fights than him will follow his lead “because he is a trickster” Then he looses to teammate because he got tricked Why? because he has no experience With Trickery… But still let’s all follow his lead. ———— Concepts pretty good, once you look past the above, I’m sticking to it as I don’t have anything else to read, but It’s on the edge of being unbearable.