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KingBing96
male LV 14I enjoy to read fantasy because those are the stories that catch my fancy more than other genres. Reading is a good way to explore the worlds created by others.
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The story is really interesting it鈥檚 just that the MC is increasing in power too quickly without a proper explanation though. You could try to rationalize it using stockpile like you did with increasing chakra reserves. It鈥檚 just hard to picture how he is gaining power so quickly. Thank you for the story though. Imma keep reading it and your other fic because the concepts are interesting.
For his training,he had upped his weights till 4600 kg,which were near Lee's weights! He had mastered tree and water walking,as to master them you have to be able to fight while walking on tree/water for an hour,which he did with haku's help,so he started doing training for learning rasengan,as that will increase his chakra control,as well as give him a powerful jutsu.The increase of his chakra has slowed down,which means he can't use stockpile chakra training to increase his chakra anymore.
Naruto: Eye System
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?! That way you鈥檙e showing that the question is still more relevant than the exclamation. You could do it the other way if you wanna make it rhetoric
"W-where am I!?"{I am a new author please comment if you have to place the ? Mark First or the ! mark first}
Naruto: Eye System
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Nightwing version of harry would probably be better. Plus he could always develop another ability later if he also gets exposed to the cosmic rays
Should he be given the SSS and be turned into a type of Nightwing vigilante
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Genius 馃憣馃徏馃馃徏
Send Jerry to live his dream of being a water delivery man.
Should I kill him? Or just send him to live his dream life?
I am Morty Sanchez
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Can鈥檛 wait for more chapters. This story has gotten me hooked. Thanks for the chapter.
ch 0 8 check mate.
SON OF DUNE
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Wasn鈥檛 Jerry鈥檚 version telepathic or something.
ch 14 Important question
I am Morty Sanchez
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Honestly it鈥檚 sort of fair. Cause 2 years isn鈥檛 really long enough to catch up to elite soldiers with normal work out routines. The thing is he said that he designed the most optimal route with Brainstorm. So it鈥檚 a toss up whether or not he should be stronger. I鈥檓 just surprised he didn鈥檛 try developing a serum to strengthen his base since he can take the watch off. Anyways hope to see more soon.
ch 13 Author Updated
Ben 10/MCU
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Also thanks for the chapters
ch 0 3 update so far
Wakanda Forever: In Marvel as Tchala's younger brother
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I mean it鈥檚 a fanfic and the world could be an AU so if you really want the ages to be closer and Romanda to be his only wife no one should complain. Plus you鈥檙e story so go ham on the details you want instead of following all pre established facts. Like say T鈥機halla is 18 and the MC is 13 so Shuri could literally be a year older than the mc or be smack dab in the middle are wise.
ch 0 3 update so far
Wakanda Forever: In Marvel as Tchala's younger brother
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Thanks for the chapter great fic btw
ch 0 8 Taijutsu progress and massacre
Naruto-The secret sage
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Hope to see this fic up and going again.
ch 0 1 Dropping the fic
Spells and Super Soldiers (HP/MCU) (SI)
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Eh doesn鈥檛 really matter pushing the timeline a bit in either directions as long as it follows the events that pop up
(To clarify the timeline, this story takes place in 2010, before any of the other Marvel events, except for Captain America's origin. Carol Danvers was abducted by the Kree 10 years ago.)
Marvel: Electro
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Shameless reader review to hopefully get more chapters soon. Hope to enjoy more chapters soon.
fairy tail, Dragon Takeover
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