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Because knowing how to gather energy, which he shouldn’t have been able to learn so easily, doesn’t mean you know how to use it to improve your body or soul
Thus, I decided to try to train my soul as well as my body. Once done, it was as if my body was regenerating, and my spirit was rising.
Fantasy · MasterCarlRoy
I don’t want to check the anagram for a 24 letter long name
So my father replied, "Then it's decided, his name will be Schadet Oporitorco Ryushin."
Fantasy · MasterCarlRoy
But this isn’t an introduction, these people know each other, nobody talks like that, I understand what you were trying to do, but trying to shove exposition into regular dialogue by making the characters talk unnaturally isn’t the way to go
After approaching enough, he said, "Seimei no tsurugi we must choose our baby's name."
Fantasy · MasterCarlRoy
It doesn’t make sense, because it is just inefficient to display the name of attributes and then display them again but with their actual values this time, that kind of inefficiency isn’t something a system would do
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Fantasy · MasterCarlRoy
Google translate wasn’t having it when I checked his name, so your symbolism didn’t work very well
So my father replied, "Then it's decided, his name will be Schadet Oporitorco Ryushin."
Fantasy · MasterCarlRoy
What’s the point of this line if the system is going to display the stats with their value anyway?
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Fantasy · MasterCarlRoy
Why doesn’t he share a family name with his parents?
So my father replied, "Then it's decided, his name will be Schadet Oporitorco Ryushin."
Fantasy · MasterCarlRoy
Who talks that this? Just say their first name or a term of endearment like a normal person rather than saying their full name
After approaching enough, he said, "Seimei no tsurugi we must choose our baby's name."
Fantasy · MasterCarlRoy
How does he know how to safely do either?
Thus, I decided to try to train my soul as well as my body. Once done, it was as if my body was regenerating, and my spirit was rising.
Fantasy · MasterCarlRoy
Here is my quantum deduction, everyone is in a superposition of being a criminal and not a criminal but once they are observed the superposition position will collapse to either one, proving their innocence or condemning them
The A.I. Chip Module's computational power was immense, and it could quickly go through every piece of footage and database, analyzing the information, searching for patterns, and making quantum deductions.
Fantasy · Redsunworld
I like the variety between the names of gifts even within the same tier, like the Celestial Qilin Bow is pretty short and sweet and then we might have something like Ultimate Sovereign World Annihilation Sword of Total Oblivion, Eternity and the Boundless Might of True Conquest by a Hero of Justice and Friends, which may or may not be too long, it’s still up to debate within the community
"Congratulations on obtaining the Tier I Gift, the Continent Devourer World Snake Armor.
Fantasy · Redsunworld
Can we go back to the samsara sacrificial grounds? I don’t like sas mara
All those sacrifices filled the ceiling of the Sasmara Sacrificial Ground with a massive amount of Fortune, pulsing with power and all sorts of mystical and majestic forces that were too complex for the trio to understand.
Fantasy · Redsunworld
That’s just how the world works normally, think of when you are in a moving vehicle and you look out the window, it’ll look like the world is moving past you, from your own frame of reference you are always still
"There is no need to fear. We will be inside a space-time nullity bubble. It would be as if the world was moving around us instead of us around the world. Even for me, it's hard to explain, but if you remain inside the bubble and do not forcibly try to exit it, you will be fine."
Fantasy · Redsunworld
Why are they scared? He hasn’t even said how fast they will accelerate to the speed of light yet, that’s the important part for their survival, high speeds don’t really do anything to the body by itself, the real problem is air resistance which would cause friction and the acceleration which would apply high forces to their body
As soon as they heard those words, all the awe in the Dark Emperor and Prime Minister's hearts was replaced by dread. Moving at 50% of the speed of light would mean they would travel at roughly 150,000 kilometers per second. Moving at such speed could push all the blood to their heads, and that was if their bodies did not shatter first.
Fantasy · Redsunworld
He should’ve given him that before entering the samsara arsenal module, now the flame will know he didn’t obtain it himself and will give him less rewards
"In it are the Insect Army's corpses from last week. I kept them for you."
Fantasy · Redsunworld
He seems to be progressing towards the depiction in that painting the old man made for him pretty quickly
Some of the soldiers could not help but kneel on the ground, and it seemed like they were about to start praying as they witnessed these seemingly divine abilities.
Fantasy · Redsunworld
In my defence authors like using the word ”world” to refer to the entire thing the story takes place in rather than just a planet
"Careful. That man is the Singularity of this world."
Fantasy · Redsunworld
This is a total scam, zatiel had to become the strongest existence in his universe, create the greatest race to ever live and then reincarnate into said race and while dead influence people to follow his plans and only then after reaching the law realm with all that did he become the singularity, how did cain manage a similar feat?
"Careful. That man is the Singularity of this world."
Fantasy · Redsunworld
So we are going to ignore Apex, who is the system spirit, who looks at the seal that keeps the Red King trapped which also very clearly seems to have been made by Zatiel and Ezequiel?
No matter the treasure's origin or its value, Cain would never allow anything to search through his memories. After all, he had too many secrets, such as being a Reincarnator, the Absolute Life Form System, and Apex.
Fantasy · Redsunworld
Adding in unnecessary words doesn’t make it formal, the way the information is presented would affect how formal it is, removing the line that is completely unnecessary wouldn’t affect the formality of the interface in anyway except making it look nicer, making it look like a message from a friend would change its formality though
Reincarnated as a Noble: The Beginning of the End
Fantasy · MasterCarlRoy