I just wish my ideas do not go to waste. Please read my writing 🙏
2020-05-12 Joined United Kingdom
Thanks so much for your support🙏🏾
ch 0 1 The marriage alliance
History · prettydimple
In terms of characters, it is western but the culture that is the clothing, buildings and things like this are eastern. Hope that isn’t too confusing
ch 0 1 The marriage alliance
History · prettydimple
I am curious to know who was speaking I to her mind then if it wasn’t Xavier
ch 0 7 A Voice In Her Mind
Fantasy · PurpleLight
Love the imagery in this chapter 👍
ch 0 1 Betrayed!
Fantasy · PurpleLight
Quotation marks should be in front of correction
Correction: We kill the people who kidnap children, Miss Chae. We save the children from their kidnappers." His voice lowered as his mouth touched her ear. "There is such a difference."
Urban · Aphrodite_Love
Sorry to leave an unrelated comment but I would like to ask for the artist who did your cover?
ch 0 1 The Cursed Princess
Fantasy · Eustoma_Reyna
Do you know people can tell it’s the author reviewing himself? Just curious
If would be better if you don’ include foreign phrases as your readers can’t understand what they are reading
"Tasie you remember when he was still crawling and how he played ball with Elo. Nna, rate umundia ji zi eto these days."
Urban · Rayne_black_110229
I am not talented as a author myself but I just want to give you an advise. You need to stop writing for now and learn to use dialogue tags and punctuations. You are writing the dialogue with the descriptions causing the paragraphs to be too long and jumbled to the point where it is hard to understand what you are writing. If you go too far before anyone gives you this advise or before stopping and taking the time to actually learn writing format, it will be hard to correct the mistake when you realise then later. I am just advising you as a fellow author who started with no idea of how to properly write so please do not take this the wrong way. 😁
ch 0 5 Chapter 5
Fantasy · Angelswizard
HIs character is of someone who wants to do something but is a coward. At times you can’t blame people like this 😫
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History · IrisSky
😂
Don't wait for me at the altar today because I'm already on my way to meet the love of my life. It was fun fooling you around with Ken because he's not my distant cousin but the father of the child I'm carrying. You are too innocent for me, I need a wild and rough guy to handle me well especially his black huge c*** but...
Urban · Um_royhan
If you don't mind, please leave a review for this novel🙏
ch 377 The end
Fantasy · prettydimple
The characters information and surrounding will be more clear as you read further chapters. I will try including include some character information either in the introduction or the new feature. Thx for your comment 😁
ch 0 1 The marriage alliance
The Princess’s Bittersweet Marriage to a Doting Commander
History · prettydimple