I agree. Unfortunately, Glenna is a moon elf. However, this story has multiple major characters in my story. I think you will like Aalyn and her sisters, Thurdain and Illglan. Or, maybe, Forelain and Sulabha. They are black elves, or drow with onyx skin and and hair a variatybof platinum hued shades. And if not them, then Hlina Alvadottir, a dark elf. The dark elves are not the same wild elves whose skin tones range from a creamy mocha to a dark chestnut. Nor are they the black elves whose skin is an onyx to a silvery slate color. No, dark elves are a light earthy brown to a dark porcelain black with hair coloring that ranges from platinum blonds to green, blue, purple, to brilliant platinum sheened strawberrys, to dark browns and black. I can’ really do anything about Glenna and Silvain being moon elves, however, all I can say is their are a lot of other character that are what your looking for and they will be important too.
Cutting my eyes to look up, I broke away from suckling to look up in awe at the most beautiful woman I had ever seen. Her skin glowed faintly white like the moon. She had a sharp jaw, a plump bee-stung mouth, a small turned up nose, long pointed ears, and eyes that were black orbs as vast and unending as the universe and filled with tiny filaments of light like stars and galaxies.
Fantasy · OwenQuillin
No I haven’t dropped it, but this is not a prewritten story. I am literally uploading chapters as fast as I write them.
ch 37 The Despoiling, pt 2
Fantasy · OwenQuillin
It is not where it goes.
ch 0 6 The Vixen
Fantasy · OwenQuillin
Thank you, I actually love the spelling being “Shahd” much more, but I chose to spell it phonically “Shahad” because first, this is a different world and I can do that; and second, I wanted the reader to read it and hear it in their heads like its pernounced.
"Then I give you the name Shahad. It means…"
Fantasy · OwenQuillin
Not the final chapter, I will be closing up all the threads. Calvin; Janice, Clair, Chastity, and Hannah; Mildred Smit and her daughters; Louisiana Dole; Kathryn Gorden; Randal, Donald, and Leon; and Fornasia Korrapatti. This is the final volume though.
ch 47 The End; of a Nightmare
Urban · OwenQuillin
Great question! Some IRL stuff came up that I have been dealing with, so I needed to take a break, step back, catch my breath, and reprioritize. I feel that WoftR is a great story and those that are following is steadily growing. It seems like a lot of people like it, however there are a lot that don't and have very poignant criticisms. So, I am doing two things at once and I am hoping you all can be patient with me as I go back to the first few chapters and make some changes. These changes do not affect the characters backgrounds or who they are at all. Summerset, Glenna, Viridian, and Silvain will remain completely whole as I have imagined them. However, I have just added, as of 7/6/2021, a whole new chapter 2 entitled "The Moon Priestess". Instead of giving a synopsis from Viridian's viewpoint, I am introducing Glenna Moonlilly as the Moon Priestess of Seline and tell her story starting 40 years before giving birth to Viridian. There will be 3 new chapters each one introducing a main characters influential to Viridian's life before he is even born! Then, I am going to rework the chapter "The Guardian" where the story picks up 18 months after Viridian's birth. So, I hope more than just you see's this post, and I sincerely hope that you enjoy the new chapter 2 - The Moon Priestess!
ch 28 The Arboreal Form
Fantasy · OwenQuillin
Don’t worry, it was just as Snippet. The trst is coming soon.
ch 23 From the Ashes, What Remains, pt 1
Fantasy · OwenQuillin
I can say definitively that none of the MC's women (Glenna and Silvain included); wives, mates, or concubines will be having *** with other men after taking the MC as their husband, mate or owner. This is partially addressed in Ch. 13. However, should there be any scenes where one of his women does have *** with any other male, it will not be willingly.
ch 18 The Shadows in the Mist
Fantasy · OwenQuillin
I think the speaker was being sarcastic.
"Now," She purred as she pulled away, "Let me finish or you will be stuck here all day with an umbilical cord hanging out of you!"
War of the Races
Fantasy · OwenQuillin