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ch 0 1 Ch05. Ranking
Action · MrBoness
You ccan just say this instead of saying that he need to cross his eyes and look at part of his nouse. The latter is just an unnecessary info dump.
The easiest way to use his powers on himself was to simply close his eyes.
Fantasy · Snoring_Panda
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ch 0 7 Ink Crawlers
Fantasy · Snoring_Panda
I'm loving this so far!
"We're trying to find the main figures who are spreading the idea of resistance in the people. As long as we find them, we should be fine," Bradley said.
Fantasy · Snoring_Panda
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ch 0 4 The Shop on the 3rd Quadrant
Fantasy · Snoring_Panda
Or Brad and Stan for short 😇
Bradley and Stanley walked down the street to the third quadrant, crossing over small bridges from time to time.
Fantasy · Snoring_Panda
Alright then, I'm convinced!
Then, something sharp stabbed into his arm that was reaching out for his mother.
Fantasy · Snoring_Panda
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ch 0 3 The Town of Last Hope
Fantasy · Snoring_Panda
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ch 0 2 Haunted
Fantasy · Snoring_Panda
I don't understand this part, can you describe the sharp object, because if it is a sword or something then I'd understand that someone cut his arm of and the cliffhanger would make sense. Everything else was flawless, thank you for the chapter.
Then, something sharp stabbed into his arm that was reaching out for his mother.
Fantasy · Snoring_Panda
Dull, more like Duuuuu'h haha
Dulls were people who had not or could not awaken any powers at all. These people were shunned in the town and were usually forced to work on the farms at the edge of the city, not far away from the veil.
Fantasy · Snoring_Panda
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ch 0 1 Ch06. Vs Quintus
BECOMING AN IRREGULAR WITH A ROGUE SYSTEM
Action · MrBoness