Thanks, really. I know it probably didn't mean a lot to you to write it, but you writing it did mean a lot to me. So, yeah, thanks.
ch 0 3 Attempts at Forced Learning
Book&Literature · THE_Bird
I suppose that would be me? The second part, at least. I am not bold enough to try and claim the whole "heavy hangs the head" thing. But I have actually been considering going back to edit this line in particular, into "Heavy hangs the head which bears the crown, but if the King's head cannot bear it? Then let it fall to the ground... Crown still around it." What do you think, as a lover of the original, works best?
"Heavy is the head which bears the crown," Alistair said, his voice grave, "But if the King refuses to bear that weight, then his head should fall to the ground alongside his crown."
Book&Literature · THE_Bird
Don't worry, I'll help you out. He'll Monty Python them. Sorry for the spoiler
ch 0 7 Desperate Times
Book&Literature · THE_Bird
No, he said that the ONLY woman a man should obey is their mother. Notice that obeying men is fine, but women? pft, don’t make him laugh!
Feeling a bit embarrassed I do as told. After all the only woman a man should openly obey is the one that birthed him.
Anime & Comics · Paradox_
At least once a month. Other than that? No, not really.
ch 0 6 A Meeting with a Simple Baker in Attendance
Book&Literature · THE_Bird
You know, I get your point, it has been quite a few seconds since I updated. In all seriousness, no; I am slow, but I have no plans of abandoning this story, seeing as the only reason I abandoned my previous story was that it was so long that I could not write anything new for years. In contrast, this one, well, it has an ending planned already.
ch 0 5 The Integration of the Voice
Book&Literature · THE_Bird
“I never loved my brothers. A sad thing for a man to admit, but it's true. You were the brother I chose.” - Robert to Ned. I get that it is probably exajurated, but they haven't seen each other in years with Robert in the Vale, and they are very different people.
"I know that! Two men can't have a child together, Stannis, I know exactly how that process works if you need some help with it." Robert interrupted with a huff, before laughing at his jest.
Book&Literature · THE_Bird
what you agree with is a completely different statement than the one written above, you say that a person should listen to their mother, not my exact opinion, but fair enough. what the author claims is that a mans mother is the ONLY woman a man should listen to, and that he should in all other cases dismiss her statements or following her lead on the basis of her gender
Feeling a bit embarrassed I do as told. After all the only woman a man should openly obey is the one that birthed him.
Anime & Comics · Paradox_
i know it is, but i find it to be a singularly stupid one, which, to my interpretation at least, implies that men are somehow better than women, since the saying says nothing about men not obeying other men, an idea i personally find grating
Feeling a bit embarrassed I do as told. After all the only woman a man should openly obey is the one that birthed him.
Anime & Comics · Paradox_
did you miss the part where it said that his aloof look were their weakness? not saying that being handsome hurt, just that neglect and disregard made them want him.
Her junior and senior sisters, on the other hand, were looking at Jiu Shen in an uncovered adoration and admiration. Who could blame them? Jiu Shen's devilishly handsome face and aloof look were the weaknesses of these little maidens' hearts. It only took them a glance to fall for his otherworldly face.
Eastern · Malignant
well, the thing about haki is that they can't check how much they have left, because will ISN'T a finite resouce
[Will: 250/250]
Anime & Comics · UchihaFanatic
I would be incredibly grateful if you told me how you were upset, the feedback would great.
ch 16 could i get parcial credit?
Anime & Comics · THE_Bird
you... you took two different expressions, isn't it either [blank] this [blank] that or [blank] here [blank] there, not half of each
"Hmph, Sasuke here Sasuke that. Let me show you what I, the future Hokage can do!"
Anime & Comics · Yukki_Sensei
if it was a one-night stand id be prone to agree with you, however, I think there's more nuance involved when she was essentially drugged and rapped.
Artemis nodded, she didn't feel much for the child that had come out of her, maybe if it had been a girl she might feel something, but for a man she wouldn't feel the slightest shred of love or caring... at least she thought so...
Book&Literature · TheGodSage
yeah it isn't exactly a system thing to say is it?
[ pretty much everything you are thinking of , ofcuz the major part of system is ' system shop ' , you can buy whatever your heart desire , skills , material things , as we are in wizard world - wands , spells , pets , potions , familiars , bloodline - although it's not recommend at this point in time ( after a year maybe ) . system can also show stats , store things , keep your mind protected etc ]
Others · AshxTan
Mistake by the author. Just- to be clear, not transmigration. Wanted the challenge of never being in the head of the only unknown character, but it does make it a bit hard to clear up unintended secrets, because no one would ever think of transmigration outside of transmigration, so it will never be mentioned, but... well, it's hard to prove a negative without ever mentioning the subject
"Thank you for the help with glasses over there, Hermione, and I do as a matter of fact know one or two spells. Harry, if you would, hold out your hand, with a galleon on your palm, and I shall demonstrate the un coup de pince spell." The blonde boy was speaking with so much energy and just… fun, that it popped the awkward silence she had managed to create. Like he had opened the window to air out a stale room.
Blood of Tar
Book&Literature · THE_Bird