Do the impossible, see the invisible, Row! Row! Fight the power! Touch the untouchable, break the unbreakable, Row! Row! Fight the power!
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He can copy the inverse of someone's ability if he knows what it is by sight.
ch 13 Flawless Travel
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Make things slow, depending on his output in the area, the cooldown and effectiveness scales.
"Told ya that wouldn't work. Now, to end this!" Suddenly, another object came flying at Reggie from behind, and since his Spring was no longer active, it went through this time and hit him in the back of the head, which dazed him for a moment. Since Clyde no longer had his Spring active on the sword, he could now activate it all around him as he did before. As time slowed around him, he ran over and grabbed his sword and sheath and turned around to face Reggie, who was frantically recovering and trying to throw more punches. He took a deep breath, then unleashed a powerful attack, an upwards slash that makes use of the target's immobility to cause significantly more damage. A technique taught by the 'Seeking Blade' at Kazaha school of swordsmanship.
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? I'm sorry, I don't know what this means exactly?
The MC's hometown. It's in the middle of the map, on the border of Orthlys and Econica
"Fat chance. You motherfuckers attacked Lifah. It's because of you that my sister is dead." He said with anger in his eyes. Something didn't feel right. He felt like someone was missing. The woman who carried him out of the fight was gone, but more importantly, Emria was nowhere to be seen.
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It's to indicate a jump in location or setting. They don't count as characters or words, so I find it ideal as to not pump up the word count. But you're right, I probably could have done with a bit less 😅
ch 35 Forgiveness From the Fated Day (2)
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There will not be :)
"Oh, sorry! So, you're Emria Xilris, you're Saphrilla Xilris, and he's Rein Xilris? So you're siblings? You don't exactly look alike…" Said Chloe, putting her finger on her chin in a thinking motion. While examining Rein's face, she grew a surprised expression.
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Of course, as I was a silly author back then, i can recognize the silly mistakes that my silly self made 😅
"Heh, you're sharp. Sorry about this, jobs a job. You're right though. We're not Econican soldiers. We're a group called 'Checkmate'. We were hired by a group of Orthlys nobles who'd benefit from a war. One of them even placed a hefty bounty on the children of Drevius Alister. Can't exactly reveal who it was, but I'm sure you've figured it out by now. Doesn't do ya much good since you're about to die." He said as he took a cigarette out and lit it.
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The mask isnt covering his mouth, More of his eyes and head. His mouth is still visible
"Why thank you, Sir Clyde." Responded Rein in a playful tone. He noticed the masked man standing in the corner crack a smile at him, then leave the arena.
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Yet another example of my inexperience 😅. I’ll try and fix the para asap tho, thanks for pointing this out. 👍
"Please Rein… Make sure my girl's safe, and don't let your sister do anything crazy." Mrs. Yaku spoke with a gratuitous yet tormentuous tone.
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It would be some other animal, so if he transformed into a tiger for example, the inverse would be a type of bird or something
"Yeah, it's amazing. What animal is that though? A bear? A tiger? Whatever it is, it smells really bad." She said as she covered her nose jokingly, making Quint blush from embarrassment.
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If he knows what it is, he can copy it by sight. If he doesn’t know what it is, he has to touch them to copy it
He quickly realized why she opted for that. She didn't want to make contact with Rein, somehow knowing that Rein could deduce what a Spring was by touch. He smiled at her, then shrugged his shoulders innocently, walking past her with his eyes closed. As he passed her, she whispered something into his ear, making his face grow stern as he continued past her to the first place pedestal. He tried putting what she told him at the back of his mind, trying to erect a facade of confidence to the cheering crowd, but hints of unease could be seen growing on his face.
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Well, he doesn't team up with him, he's just taken against his will, and for some unknown reason by Core. He doesn't become his companion at all, in fact, they actually split up at chapter 8. Though I understand if it's not your cup of tea. This was my first go at writing, so it's understandable that people wont like it. 😅
ch 0 5 The Inverse System
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Instead of controlling physical aspects of the world, he could, to an extent, control mental aspects, creating illusions or other such things
Rein often trained with Emria and Saphrilla, whose telekinesis Spring came in very handy when Emria is unable to move while using her Spring. Voron, still oblivious to Rein's inverse system, spent most of his time researching the origins of Rein's power.
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Yeah, fair enough I guess 😅. I see a lot of my inexperience in these earlier chapters. Though I think I was trying to show a progression in character from a careless main character to a more methodical one in the future. I wanted a close call that would teach him that, and this is what I opted for. I think I could've executed it a little better, but it's too late now 😅. Thanks for at least giving it a chance past the time skip though! I appreciate it 👍
ch 16 The Peculiar Girl
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Shes able to manipulate things in a physical aspect, like telekinesis. When Rein inverts it, it changes to mental aspect
The next morning, Rein woke up and met up with Chloe, Emria, and Saphrilla. Rein had switched rooms with Chloe the previous day and had her sleep with the 2 girls. He anticipated something like this would happen. He passed by Weiss' room and peered into it to see nobody inside. He sighed and continued walking. He had copied Saphrilla's telekinesis power, which allowed her to physically manipulate objects. Copying it made Rein able to mentally manipulate things, with some limitations of course. Everything that had happened to Weiss was an illusion, and his mind was most likely broken thereafter.
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I'm totally fine with that! You didn't need permission, you're free to use whatever terms you want! 👍
"Sis! You're back! What took you so long?" Exclaimed Rein with a happy smile on his face.
Inverse System
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