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2020-12-06 Joined Global
Oh my god I'm really falling behind on the editing aspect it's really passing over my head will fix it
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Fantasy · AnaRose
Honestly speaking, your writing is very mature and detailed. I was very impressed with each description and dialogue it was so good. The mystery element is good!![img=recommend] Just when I thought A was the one, something makes me feel otherwise but I'm wrong again and it's a cycle that's interesting. I'm overall very impressed with how mature your writing and story flow is!! Good luck t.h
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LOL
AUTHOR: By the way, my book was an omegaverse
LGBT+ · yohan26_
Ah ok I think I corrected that bit thank you
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Fantasy · AnaRose
Ohh not even when it's a dialogue?
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Fantasy · AnaRose
Thank u so much❤️
really?🥺 thank u sm for supporting
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Fantasy · AnaRose
thank you I have edited all your corrections!😊
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Fantasy · AnaRose
This book definitely lives uptown its genre. The descriptions are very good and isn't too complicated in case of readers who don't have a vast vocabulary. I like how the FL is sure of her feelings and acts on that and doesn't budge. This will make the reader want to know how the relationship changes over time. I even liked how when Melody crossed the line when her emotions clouded her, it wasn't just looked over. It was acknowledged as a bad part on her side as a doctor. The story moves pretty fast with things happening with quick pace. I think more narration of the main character's feelings or inner thoughts would be nice! I liked how you correctly explained the honorifics system and used many phrases with reference to the culture you're basing your characters on! Overall a very fun book! Keep up!
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Teen · Lynnifer Ice