if you read the story you would have your answer.
why wouldn't she kiss someone she's interested in being with?
ch 22 Chapter 22: Overprotective Motherhood...
Fantasy · cbowman782020
As of the latest chapter and also before he assimilated Chaotic Energy to complete his mortal path the MC has stated that fully buffed he only hits around 650 UPL. He's never been close to 1100 so I think you might of misread something.
Not counting my Companions that could be pushed at the same height as a Rank 3, I, myself, can become their menace with my Rank 4 Transcendent UPL.
Fantasy · Dyrem
She's true to her nature. What do you expect of a demon succubus?
ch 0 5 Chapter 5: The Devil made me do it...
Fantasy · cbowman782020
You didn't name the man. Sentence just ends and you go to name a woman and then two other men.
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Fantasy · NandoFalske
last word not last world
Though I said that, even before the last world left my mouth, the Purple Lightning Sword already cut through him. His bladed staff which he somehow managed to lift was also cut in two.
Fantasy · Dyrem
In a blink of an eye
On the brink of an eye, she wrapped it up around her shoulders. It was then she realized that it had a weird texture to it. And why wouldn't it be? It was made of monster skin and fur.
Fantasy · Shiny_Shirogane
when you say one thing in a chapter completely changing what was said in an easier chapter... that's an inconsistency... and since you don't want such "bad readers" to read your book... maybe you should stop writing... might do the world a favor... makes me wonder with how you talk to people if you didn't still your story from someone else.... your rants are different compared to the writing style of the book... [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Envy was one of the Great Demons with the most potential to gain power, and like the others except for Sloth, thought Lust was the weakest of them. Of course, they had no way of knowing how incredibly strong Lust and Lucien's connection could be, and soon everyone would have to revise their ideas of what the true power was.
Fantasy · LamenThief
lol... YOU cause your problems with readers. I've read the comments and reviews and it's you that take offense even to complements. As typical, you gloss over the good stuff. The fact I liked your book and was HELPING you with an inconsistency isn't trashing you as the author or the book. You do it to yourself and your own book.
Envy was one of the Great Demons with the most potential to gain power, and like the others except for Sloth, thought Lust was the weakest of them. Of course, they had no way of knowing how incredibly strong Lust and Lucien's connection could be, and soon everyone would have to revise their ideas of what the true power was.
Fantasy · LamenThief
how you would try to escape from me
"You are already mine. I would love to find out how you escape from me." Klautz words had more than one meaning. But it doesn't take a genius to figure out what Selena interpreted his words as. Selena took it as his declaration of love for her whereas the reality of the matter was that Klautz indeed wanted her to try to escape; So that he can judge the limits of his class.
Fantasy · Shiny_Shirogane
But Selena's thoughts... it wasn't Verona who was thinking in the previous paragraph.
But Verona's thought didn't reach Klautz as he was more focused on trying to read Verona's face… after all Klautz not only wants an answer from her but also wants to figure out her underlying intentions.
Fantasy · Shiny_Shirogane
dare get in his way
In a lot of ways, Selena had the gut feeling that Klautz doesn't need her. In a way, it was indeed true that he could do away without her. and he would toss her aside the moment she did something against his interests, therefore Selena didn't dare come in his way.
Fantasy · Shiny_Shirogane
What has that got to do with my review?
Netori System [Original]
Urban · GhostyXXX