Honestly, my grammar sucks, and idek if I'm gonna do well when I write, but everyone gots to start somewhere right. So I'm gonna try to write something I think is interesting but not too complicated.
2021-01-29 Joined United States
I would love for more characters to be fleshed out. I dont need hundreds of chapter per person. But learning more or seeing characters bond would be great. I understand it the first volume so your setting things up, and not everyone need to be included, but having pov’s from other characters and even enemies is great, it allows us to see things from a enemies or allies perspective. Also this last part is more or less my preference , but please make the mc ambitious . Every mc wants to be strong , or protect people which is nice and all, but havibg a character who wants to become a god, want to rule, wants to lead, for reasons other than protecting or morals, would feel mych more human( again the whole ambitious mc is all personal preference )
ch 87 Hail King Vlad!
Fantasy · Redsunworld
Who is micheal godsoul again? Like was he mentioned earlier in the story?
ch 770 The new Prime Minister
Fantasy · Redsunworld
From what i can telll, this sounds pretty logical, i will say tho, try not to drag this arc for hundreds and hundreds of chapters. If you can me it good awesome , but so far the story makes sense and connects well. But i would love to see if the MC could take control of the world will instead of the demon will, but again if you make the story good then i dont really care😂. Just keep uploading
ch 35 Source of Hunters
Fantasy · CoughBlood
Hey author keep up the chapters. From the first 20 chapter alone, i can tell that if done right that novel will do well. Don’t get disheartened about low views for the start though. Lots of readers like to binge read
ch 20 Destruction Begins with Some Slices of Life
Fantasy · AmDevilCrafts
Idk who vale is? Mix up in mc names im guessing?
Watch aina breakthrough to creation state after this battle😂
ch 2607 Desperation
Fantasy · Awespec
Honestly i enjoyed these chapters. Your not making it super difficult to understand which makes it great
ch 38 Marrow cleansing Pill
Fantasy · CHVA2001
Savants I believe
'In this time of crisis, the humans have produced a God Childe? But he has yet to mature. I'll need to approach this with caution.'
Fantasy · Awespec
Hey author, all i wanna say is keep up the good work. The grammar and writing of your book is already amazing. I think what you need most is just more chapters. I know people love to binge read, so eventually people will start reading when your chapters start to climb up
ch 112 106. A non-threatening apocalypse?
Fantasy · Dexter_Sled_1111
Please have times skips, i love the pacing of the story, but i dont want the characters to be barely 30-40 when the books ends, throw in a few times skips so we can see massive improvements, i feel like a lot of authors are afraid to age there character’s. Also please give us some POV’s of KALEB, maybe Alice.
[A/N: It's me, the author. I hope you've been enjoying reading Supreme Lord as much as I enjoy writing the story. It has been a rough journey for me, but I hope I could deliver an enjoyable story until now. First of all, I wanted to ask if the story is progressing nicely, or if there are major flaws that have to be fixed ASAP. If you found something that bothered you excessively don't hesitate. Write it down in the comments and inform me. I can only improve the story with your help ;D]
Fantasy · HideousGrain
I see you have a tag for kingdom building, when will that start taking place?
ch 124 The Color of Sunrise (final) End of Volume One
Fantasy · BRICKTRADER
Question: we know that lux can summon the giant skeleton now. But can each of his clones summon one too? Or it just one giant skeleton?
ch 785 You’re Going To Give Me An Egg?
Fantasy · Elyon
Hey author, i know you have a webtoon for your wizards book, is that still going to continue ?
ch 312 I Miss Them Already
System's POV
Fantasy · Elyon