Born in California and trying to change the world one horrible word choice at a time.
2021-06-10 Joined United States
Thank you so much! I appreciate it!
Haha, of course. You're killing it!
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No, stick with it man! it's you, and I love it!
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I really like the MC's character design. They're language, as well as the way they think distinguishes them a lot.
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Honestly, a great novel from what I've read so far. Your descriptive language is on point, the world seems unique and interesting, and although your writing style is unique, I don't have a horribly hard time following it. Great job!
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I appreciate it. You really are doing great! I can't wait to work my way through the last three chapters.
ch 0 4 Amran, Lady of Kasdim
Fantasy · Venusean
Great character design for Lady Amran, and you did a great job of describing both the clothing of Lady Amran, as well as the scenery. Sometimes I wish there was a little more to let me know who's talking and when, but it's normally not too difficult to tell.
ch 0 4 Amran, Lady of Kasdim
Fantasy · Venusean
Right out the gate, you do a great job introducing your story and you have great writing style. I'm grateful for the opportunity to read your story!
To Burn a Kingdom
Fantasy · Aeirana