Webnovel Author: Venalter - Fanfic Collection

You can see how many chapter that i already read, so ill give some head up. MC is what you called brat with background, so you can't say MC too naive because he is. The Development of MC character is too much long for i like but im still try to read it, already 200 but still in Danmachi, its WOW for me.

i just want to do it UwU Qian Renxue became Yandere after the first simulation, i dunno about Bibi Dong since she got the memory but she became passive same as Chen Xin Till 125 there is no sign of harem, but romantic interest is

this novel is good but your translation without any proofreader or any fix in some word make it worse and in the end i choose to fix it myself thanks and goodbye, im gonna back to scrap again dunno when

GOOD LUCK AND WELCOME BACK BRO. for new reader this novel novel about otome and hidden dungeon, you can expect good fanfic in here, for you who search smut there will be a lot of them when MC realize or rather done for his family drama. i really like your story but since MC got his first, this story becoming a lot of smut, but i do hope there will be change in new volume

This novel readable if you just ignore many translator inconsistent with their translate I really expect it this novel has same quality like Doulou Ronin if the Translator fix their translation. - Readable - Many Grammar mistakes on power term in soul land ( Soul Power, Name of beast, Name of items)

Before I forget I'm gonna write a review here You better fix how to address cultivation level properly and about Techniques level too. I'm know you are using MTL, but please do proof read and fix some words if you do you will get more audience. The best MTL that I know in here is from Kiss Shot with novel called btth simulator

Let me share my experience about this novel, the first few chapter you will be expecting MC cringe as hell, but after that improved well enough so you can endure it, if you really want to read this novel. There is no grammarly mistake in the translation and i amazed with the dedication of translator. I already read almost 150 chapters and there is little romance till here, didnt know about upcoming chapter and the so called NTR from other reviewer. I will give this novel translation 5 stars 1. Readable 2. I like HI3 3. Story is quite good 4. I like HI3 5. Expecting Harem ( feel that will be inc**t 6. I like HI3

The translation is bad, I feel like it's just copy paste after you got it from machine and post it without any proof read and any fix. Don't bother read it, my advice for fellow reader

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