Webnovel Author: Firelorn_P_King - Novel Collection

Assassin's, brokers, wisps and the best part, magic. The story encompasses a lot of things in fantasy. The plot is straight forward and the grammar is great, very understandable. If I was to complain I would say the first few were a bit slow but it gets better real quick. As a story with a lot to say about the main character and the adventure they go through, it's an interesting read.

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Fascinating, the experience these characters go through in the name of discovery of that one emotion, love. I like the struggle between love and lust that the characters went through, it made it interesting. Well written with good grammar as well. In a way, it feels like an intriguing romance story where the characters journey through their lives to find true love. It's a good read.

The story is well thought out and the grammar is clean, neat and well written. I also enjoyed the plot of the story as well, very smooth and understandable. I know it starts a bit grey due to the MC's past but reading through the thoughts of the mc, Bryan, it's a bit funny too. Just from reading a few chapters I was able to visualize what was happening like a movie. I enjoyed the immersive nature of the story. And the situations made sense, heck, I would say they were kind of realistic. A very good story with a lot of potential overall.

I've taken a good while of my time to read this novel, and let me just say... This is not a story, it's a masterpiece, it's a movie, and a good one at that. Need I say more.

I've got to say, for a fantasy novel it's got a lot of action, adventure and surprisingly drama. I read the first chapter, before you know it, I was on the fourth one. It's really driven and energetic especially in the dialogues of the main character. It was just so much to read in one sitting but not so much to overwhelm you. All in all, I enjoyed it.

It's an acquired taste. The beginning was a bit weird and surprising, but it was definitely intriguing. From the 'culture' writing, you can see that the author is definitely a man of culture. Thus, it's definitely an exciting read for my fellow men of culture out there. The grammar is quite alright as well as the intricate descriptions of the characters. I also like how unique the plot of the story is, especially with its utilization of the 'enhancers' in such a power driven world background. It's an exciting read indeed, especially after the first few chapters. That's when the 'climax' takes effect.

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This novel feels to me like a well thought out masterpiece. The immediate entry drew me in, war, spirits, even time altering events. It's not your usual cliché start and it only gets better from there. I liked the detailed expression of the characters, it felt like there was a lot of character development between the characters and their backgrounds. The grammar is also on point. I expected some errors on the first chapter but there weren't any to my knowledge and even further in the story. I enjoyed the read, and I expect others to do the same.

I didn't go too far into the story and I was already drawn in by this complex yet understandable mix of fantasy, mystery, and thriller. The descriptive background of the story placed me on the edge of my seat. I especially enjoyed the dynamic duo of the two vampires, no spoilers. The story gives me certain modern vampire movie vibes but definitely holds true to its uniqueness. And you can tell that time was well spent in writing this story, a lot of time. There's just so much to unpack from this plot that it kinda keeps me well engaged to the story. Keep it up author.