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Silver_Chaos77

Silver_Chaos77

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It's been five years since I started reading, three years on Webnovel, and I write as a hobby, I especially like fan fics, western and Eastern fantasy as well as system novels. Anime and Manga Too.

2022-03-15 Joined Global

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Replied to GodOfLightning

Also, the entire premise of the fic is for the MC to be prepared in advance for the events of the show, having him go down with the others would defeat the whole purpose and premise of the fic

The fun method, directly joining the hundred. That way he can live and interact with his favorite characters, get closer to those he wants to fuc-- be his wives, and experience their hardship as his own.

The 100: Advanced Preparation

The 100: Advanced Preparation

TV · Silver_Chaos77

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I'll talk about what I found bad then about what I found good. Bad: First of all, the info dumps in the first 3 chapters are INSANE, 100 paragraphs plus of just listening skills and their uses, now after reading all that you expect to see them being used in a fight right? No. which brings me to my next point. Fights. They were boring, the MC didn't utilise even a tenth of the abilities he has, some contradictions happen that don't make sense which only serves to make the fight seem forced, for example fights he would easily win are blown out of proportion for no reason, I personally got very frustrated at that. He gets many OP abilities, then during fights it's as if he forgot they existed. Also, when a change of POV occurs, first person isn't used which makes things confusing at best. Good: The OG the writer added in aren't half bad, minimal to no spelling and grammatical mistakes, story development is great though forced at times, the chapters are long, the established world build is utilised well and you can tell some creative juices were spent on this. Changes: As the story progressed, the fights are still frustrating but the info dumps did get lighter. I would love if the author adopted the 'show not tell' policy, and train in writing fights scenes more to get better. At least use AI those fights really aren't readable. Do I recommend this? Well, make your own opinion of that and I hope this review/rant helped. ♡

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Well.....then why couldn't he have done that with ALL is attacks....

However instead of just firing it at him like normal I use Limitless to teleport behind it and before he can react I fire it.

I'm a Daemon, so what? (Tensura/Multicross)

I'm a Daemon, so what? (Tensura/Multicross)

Anime & Comics · theogbasilisk

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Replied to Grrrrrrrrr

Fixed~ Thanks for pointing it out ♡

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Weren't they all identical

Ethan spotted a faint golden light in the distance, flickering in and out like a star.

Dungeon King: My Goblins Have Captured Countless Female Players

Dungeon King: My Goblins Have Captured Countless Female Players

Fantasy · Red_Skin_Duck

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It wouldn't work with the story's premise. The entire Advanced Preparation would be useless. I don't need to copy every other The 100 fanfic beginning. This is MY STORY which I wanted to have a unique opening.....great conversation

The fun method, directly joining the hundred. That way he can live and interact with his favorite characters, get closer to those he wants to fuc-- be his wives, and experience their hardship as his own.

The 100: Advanced Preparation

The 100: Advanced Preparation

TV · Silver_Chaos77

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