Webnovel Author: coredisciple - Fanfic Collection

This story is amazing. Funny, interesting, light-hearted and witty. You won’t be a single trashy trope (in fact this story is so spontaneous and random, it’s too funny). 5/5 story

The book is amazing. Hands down of the best concepts there is. It’s written well and flows very smoothly. It’s also really interesting, fun, and engaging to the reader. My only concern is the MC. He comes the poorest and trashiest of places but he remains a naive kid. I understand it’s for the sake of character development but it’s been 250+ chapters and he has this idealistic vision that I find extremely annoying. Also he’s very inconsistent with how he views the world. The other characters are written amazingly and are super awesome. I wish the MC was Wyntor and not this child that goes through a mental crisis after every incident. Overall, still one of the best I’ve read.

This is actually fantastic. It’s funny and creative. MC is the best type we could ask for. It’s awesome. Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

It was unexpected for me to find such a good story. The Naruto world was absolute fantastic, the world building was amazing and the humour was peak. I kinda wished we had more sweet interactions between MC and Konan. But overall great!!

One question: Is the MC autistic? I’m seriously questioning whether the MC has a problem. I understand that the MC acts this way to highlight his curiosity and amazement at this new world, but he seems like he is seriously lacking socially. I’m asking because it’s hard to find a normal 30 year old (mentally) that names their diary, along with many other cues.

I have one question for the author. Why does the MC continue to show off so much strength despite his circumstances. Firstly, he’s only a 2-star talent so he should have a much slower growth rate. Does it not make sense that no one has questioned his significant behavioural change, eye colour change and super strength that happened all of a sudden? Another thing is why does he not wear contact lenses or at least glasses? Purple eyes being distinctive characteristics of void-walkers should be enough for him to make cautious decisions. It’s so easy to wear some lenses but this guy has still not done so. Is there something preventing him from doing it? Not only that, doesn’t him abrupt killing intent not surprise people at all. Like he uses his aura and intent to suppress monsters and people, is that not the least bit suspicious for a complete beginner? Also, doesn’t his 4d (ability) make him much more rational? Wouldn’t that mean he would take better precautions and make safer decisions. One comment asked about whether he even needs to join an academy in the first place. All he has to do is spam dungeons and void walks. I agree with this and am wondering why he needs to join in the first place. All in all, I think this is a good story but the MCs characters seems to there just for the convenience of the plot. I just wish he could be more low-key, especially when he’s literally one of the most wanted people in the universe.