Webnovel Author: BlackMango - Novel Collection

Yeah, it was taken from that concept. I really like transmigration and more so when the main character actually uses their advanced/different knowledge to add something to the world. I This book is not about such person though (I might write one like that one day). This is about the impact they left on the world after they brought great changes.

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I read number one and said, "Yes". read no. 2 and said, "oh".

Haha. I have been a reader and now I am the author. I speak and write fluent English so I believe my writing quality should be acceptable. I made this novel because it would seem fun. It is basically completely my idea, even the cover picture was creatively "gotten". At least, I have never read a book like it. I tried to make the main character real. Not too perfect, nor are his supposed flaws soo obvious. I think the beginning might seem a bit slow, but as someone who likes some context about the world, I ensured to think it through and shove that in there. There would be no harem, for the mc at least. He would have a love life though like a normal person. He would be strong. Not the strongest but really strong. I would not diversify his powers excessively. I have always hated that thing. I am a university student, so I don't have all the time in the world, so I would try my best to post at least once every 2 weeks after ch 20.

I’d give an honest review. I really enjoy this book. It has a nice concept, good world building and the main character is well thought out. Most other characters don’t have much depth to them but it’s understandable, it’s a game with many players. I would say that I didn’t like the story development that much. It’s the classic “new power up, stronger adversaries”. How can he clash with an ancient dragon here but is scared of a baby one there. He would fight toe to toe with the strongest people in one place but go somewhere else that should on the same level but meet much stronger opponents. I know it’s for the story but I don’t like it. He can’t be losing every other mental battle, how would any other person survive on the continent if that was the case. I am also frustrated by the horrible editing further into the book, especially in the privileged chapters. These things make or break your book. Do better. I would writing a book soon and I know my review may seem harsh, but take it as constructive criticism. I do like your book hence my incessant support.