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Can’t wait to see him join Artel
Outside, Grindelwald gazed at the stars, a faint smile playing on his lips. "Big change! The big change I've been waiting for is coming soon!"
Harry Potter: The New Dark Lord Shelby
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Why are you still updating this garbage
Love how he listens to his allies
ch 47 Chapter 47 - A Merit Earned
The Dreamer's Fall
Fantasy · ODonn
What does Sans mean here?
Once inside the castle, Arthur and the other lords were escorted to a large hall stripped bare sans the long conference table and chairs occupying it.
The Dreamer's Fall
Fantasy · ODonn
Why Burnt pork? Shouldn’t it be flesh?
After a few minutes of marching, Jeren's warning rang true as the smell of rot and burnt pork seeped through the thin handkerchief into Arthur's nostrils. It was a sickening scent, only made worse by knowing of its macabre source. Thankfully, he didn't have to endure the stench for long as the sight of Rothwel's inner castle walls filled his vision.
The Dreamer's Fall
Fantasy · ODonn
Great chapter. Eye opening for Arthur no doubt.
ch 35 Chapter 35 - Foster The Merchant
The Dreamer's Fall
Fantasy · ODonn
In the ancient times the chinease emperors were worshipped, as they could map the moon and predict an eclipse. Knowing where one comes from doesn’t nessesarily exclude you from worship. Maybe it’s harder, but not impossible.
However, if a stranger appeared with incredible powers and proclaimed themselves a god, it suddenly became a little easier for most to accept.
The Dreamer's Fall
Fantasy · ODonn
Gods are wise while also having some shining accomplishment. I’m a christain. My god made a race of people who have complete free will to do as they please. He crated the world and the whole universe from the dark matter in space to the dirt I step on. You don’t worship the devil despite him being old and powerful and potentially wise even. God is good and the devil is not. In this world you’d be a fool not to worship a god, unless that god wasn’t right or just. Humans are corrupt, none are without sin. Look at Arthur, he had a stable boy condemned for insulting him. That’s not godly, that’s arrogance. No passage of time can get rid of the arrogance of man.
"So is it the faith people have in a god that makes them a god? Or is there something more? What conditions would a human have to fulfill before they shed their title as a human and become a god? How many empires would they need to see rise and fall before you believed in their words unconditionally?"
The Dreamer's Fall
Fantasy · ODonn
Awesome sequence. Truly a cut throat world
Arthur pushed Ivan's body aside and caught his breath, but everything suddenly went quiet as he glanced at Ivan's corpse. Beat by beat his heart thumped until his racing pulse drowned out the world around him.
The Dreamer's Fall
Fantasy · ODonn
Wise words from a man who’s never faced a life or death fight
"Only fools whine about fairness in a fight to the death." Arthur shot back as he analyzed himself in the vanity mirror.
The Dreamer's Fall
Fantasy · ODonn
I like it. It shows how flawed the character is. In the end it’s a cruel world with people cunning just like him. People who’ve fought more, and seen greater death. We don’t know how just like Arthur doesn’t know how
Baron Iken shook his head. "Don't let the boy's innocence fool you. He's far sharper than he lets on."
The Dreamer's Fall
Fantasy · ODonn
Nevermind I read that wrong my bad 😂
"How much crystal does the Revan family provide?" Arthur asked.
The Dreamer's Fall
Fantasy · ODonn
Change to “how many” as how much is odd
"How much crystal does the Revan family provide?" Arthur asked.
The Dreamer's Fall
Fantasy · ODonn
Awesome! Honestly, a part of me hopes he repays what his father has done for him. Emotions aside, he’s done him a great favour.
ch 0 7 Chapter 7 - Edward Revan
The Dreamer's Fall
Fantasy · ODonn
Understandable to feel that way as much as it is understandable for him to be numb. Lots of people lie to make themselves feel better but ultimately it’s hard to care about suffering you can’t see. People will go on; unchanging, until whatever it is that is wrong is dangling in their faces.
He wasn't sure if it was because he already had a mother on Earth or because he just never got a chance to know her, but his lack of emotion regarding her murder made him feel dirty.
The Dreamer's Fall
Fantasy · ODonn
It excites me reading about it
The applications of the mana soul went far beyond a possible path to immortality. An army of golems or undead was also possible. Necromancy didn't exist in Nithe, nor did any sort of undead creature, and Arthur would be a liar if he claimed that the idea of becoming Nithe's first necromancer didn't excite him.
The Dreamer's Fall
Fantasy · ODonn
Author? Are you dumb? Why don’t you ever fix mistskes?
Harry Potter: The New Dark Lord Shelby
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