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" I don't think Saintess came here with good intentions, correspondingly, such clothes don't suit your nature, it seems you wanted to talk to me about your rumors however, I believe in you, but, then again, you don't have to tell me such things, I don't have any interest in you, I am not the right person to discuss your life matters, "
The Sugar Mommy System: The Evil Young Master is Villain!!!
Eastern · Cultured_Daoist69
Bai Lung exactly didn't knew her intention but he could guess, she wasn't here for a friendly talk which can further be backed by her negative ten ( -10 ) affection towards him.
The Sugar Mommy System: The Evil Young Master is Villain!!!
Eastern · Cultured_Daoist69
He knew she wasn't here for simple talk, and her revealing clothes were nothing but a distraction.
The Sugar Mommy System: The Evil Young Master is Villain!!!
Eastern · Cultured_Daoist69
She was completely different from those ornamental vases who only had pretty faces and slutty bodies to their names with big melons and squishy back hills with Iq lower than room temperature.
The Sugar Mommy System: The Evil Young Master is Villain!!!
Eastern · Cultured_Daoist69
You hate and biology r two different things. You said it's logical and reasonable. But it's more of fictional than the original.
ch 0 1 Chapter 5- Shopping (1)
The Other Worlds Martial Arts
Fantasy · FakeCultivator001
1000 per chapter? I am talking about paragraph.
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Fantasy · FakeCultivator001
I thought you were logical, if he is going to be powerful he needs to have testrone, either keep him V or have multiple. Monogamy will won't help at all, try hormones psychology.
ch 0 1 Chapter 5- Shopping (1)
The Other Worlds Martial Arts
Fantasy · FakeCultivator001
Change the paragraph when different people speaks.
ch 0 1 Chapter 4- Guest (2)
The Other Worlds Martial Arts
Fantasy · FakeCultivator001
Bruh! It feels Ai. There should be a dialogue or exchange of words.
As An Ling sat lost in thought, a man approached him respectfully, addressing him as "young master." With a heavy heart, the man revealed yet another troubling news - another worker had left, worsening the already fragile state of their workforce.
The Other Worlds Martial Arts
Fantasy · FakeCultivator001
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Fantasy · FakeCultivator001
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Fantasy · FakeCultivator001
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Fantasy · FakeCultivator001
It feels Ai proofread.
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Fantasy · FakeCultivator001
Try breaking the paragraphs, it's long and words with similar meanings are repeated.
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Fantasy · FakeCultivator001
Feels like Ai edited or modified.
ch 0 1 Chapter 1- Arrival
The Other Worlds Martial Arts
Fantasy · FakeCultivator001
Try reading experiment 731 for guidance, sometimes common sense is dumb because most people are dumb. I got it he is from modern world but, why would he feel regret about making other work.
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The Other Worlds Martial Arts
Fantasy · FakeCultivator001
You can read these two 👍👍👍 You will love it.
The Other Worlds Martial Arts
Fantasy · FakeCultivator001