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This novel is not that bad but there some problems first it the mc personality this guy really is stupid not only that he doesn’t know how to keep a low profile I’m not saying that he should stay low for the whole chapters but that he thinks before he acts like in the chapter when he got the system and wants to try the system to see if he can get the money and it fell on him that was stupid itself i dont get why not ask the system how the money will come out instead of doing it without thinking about it And the way he thinks about woman is just bad I get that he is a character that only thinks with his b$ck but come on this guy is low and I don’t know why he did do his research about the world around him and what’s going on but no he just stays in this world for a whole 7 years without even knowing about it the only information we got in the beginning was from the people that was around him and you got to know that in this world technology is way to advanced so doing research is not that hard but he doesn’t it just doesn’t makes sense if a person was put into a world the first thing he will do is know where he is what the law of the world and what countries their are and what stats a person has you don’t have to do some of them but this will help with every situation oh and who are the stronger people and that it nothing else is to be done And don’t give me half a$$ thing that he couldn’t study because it was clearly written that he study with his sister i don’t know what was study but he had to gain knowledge of the stats he has and world information but no it’s like he forgots what he learned okay Now we got to talk about how this guy is a complete perverted person how he mentions women bodies is not that good but it like I am reading a adult book which just doesn’t fix this novel but I can deal with that. Now what good is that what the author does with mc let’s say mc is talking and he says a lie the author will put a text and something I don’t know how to explain it but it’s funny Anyway this novel is not that bad it just makes me want to quit reading it because of mc personality ya he has that smart moments but it not smart when I already have the answer I mean he got the ability that he wanted so he should know that the advantage it has and how to use it even if it different from what he thought it still works the same.

Yes I can see that but it just feel like that I hope it get better in the future but for right not that how I feel for this novel but you have a great idea for the novel

So the novel is good but I feel that this is Ai I did see that the author said that he writes it himself but i just don’t see it I feel that he got it from a Ai but edited himself which brings that idea but the thought of this novel is good the only problem it has it that when he gets or do something it makes a detail explanation about what is going to happen in the future which makes me not like this novel because it seems that it’s Ai the author should readed his novel vs other to get a better idea of what is missing and what the problem is good idea but bad writing it good but that to some extent.

Soooo don’t read it if you don’t like a stupid character and mc as much as I want to give this a read because there’s nothing to read so I give my opinion the characters are stupid mc does not think every chapter I read so far is about how scared they are and it feels like everything Is narrated like GPT but it isn’t I don’t know but that what I feel from this novel.

So I was going to write a review when it had a little chapters but I waited for a little more like 40 more but this is taking long for the update so I give my thoughts on this novel it’s good there nothing that makes this novel bad the main character is someone who thinks before he does something and he not like other he is a very clam character the background is good don’t know much about it but it’s good and the writing is the best so give it a try the only thing that’s bad is that it takes to long to update chapters hope this gets better.

I know that giving only two star is bad but am in just two chapters and I can’t read anymore the reason is how the author makes the mc talk which is annoying the mc is to surprise about and he doesn’t question what happened or what he doing but just get into the system like it’s a normal thing the way he talks is like a 13 years old kid. So what the author could improve is the way you introduce and the characters way of talking I don’t like how he just get to things and forget and goes back to it and forget everything else which is just not good anyway you can still improve you should read you own work to see what your writing and read a different author works to get some ideas of what you did worng with it or you can see what good on a novel and read the comments be it good or bad which will help a lot.

Okay i got to say that this novel really surprises me the novel is good the background is good to some extent but not bad the main character is really good there isn’t any mistakes I think but this got me hooked will there still only 14 chapters so this is only from what I got I still don’t know what the main character will do in this life I was thinking of kingdom building or whatever the author thinks about but I’m okay with it theirs no harem or many others characters that are useless and the power system the mc has is cool there isn’t much of the system but it’s okay.

I got to say that the author did a good job about the mc he is smart and has wisdom which what I like about I just hope that the author doesn’t change his story and come up with a harem I do have some questions is their any relationship that the mc will have with only one person or is there harem which if it is I have a reason to not waste my time reading it I hope the author updated more because I love this novel oh and the author should stick with mc making the kingdom better instead of mc doing unrelated stuff ya mc could fight other kingdoms or mc making technology better.

Okay so what I don’t like about this novel from the 7 chapters I read so far not much but I will only read till this because it was a turn off so let go back mc is a AI which looks good and I was really looking forward to because I have never read about a AI going back in time I did see that there would be superpowers in this one I thought that this novel would be different from others because mc is a AI goes back in time it’s a different world that it’s about to have powers okay that’s good but what was really a turn off is that the author decided to make the Ai a human where he makes his own body with the technology from the future that still good but I thought that the author would put some technology in the body like an eyes that is robot something like that but no that was fine I guess the author has plans for the story but the next second when he gets his body it was mention that he forgot his future technology all that just to forget that the mc is not a Ai anymore but a human with some intelligence and can live long this is basically a mc from the future and goes back and has future knowledge but can’t use it because the author thought it’s too op okay what author did was not good he mention that the reason he does not have his future knowledge is because in the progress in his su$c$de he destroyed all his knowledge which makes a little sense if it wasn’t because the mc still had knowledge when he made his body because that’s from the future I didn’t like it and I know some people didn’t like it either but what I give the author credit it was good for just 7 chapters at least but if you want to read it just forget that’s his a Ai and just a human the novel is still good it’s just the same but different starts. I forgot to mention that the author forgets to mention a lot of parts of the story in detail he sometimes have to explain in the comments.

Okay this novel is good i give the author credit but I do have some problems first it’s the mc for a person who was a mercenary he is afraid of someone killing him but for me I see mercenary as person that they already know that they well die in battle ya they could have considered but not that afraid. Second i don’t like how mc is nice to everyone that he meet I know that he is trying to fix his reputation but I feel that it’s a little boring other then that I see that the novel has potential I hope the mc get strong fast because of his past life experience and since he was a mercenary he will not have a problem to k$ll someone without mercy

I got to say that this novel was good but it got bad between chapter 15 I have not gone through more chapters but I just didn’t like how the author made the story and plot. I like to say that this novel was made with ChatGPT or not because of how the author made the story which seems like it was made from ChatGPT. One reason is because repeated words another thing that I see is that the story changes sometimes I think I don’t know if it’s me but it feels that the plot changes for some reasons. This novel had potential but I just feel that it was not the type of novel that I like. Now let talk about what I thought the novel was going to be about first I thought that the novel was going to be of how mc becomes stronger which he does but not the way I thought I thought that it was mc alone and trying to become stronger by himself and get some human friends along the way that would make sense but the novel didn’t do that it became more of how mc spends his time eating for 15 chapters straight till his mother got to a fight with another dragon which she decide to leave her child by themselves there 3 of them which makes the mc and his siblings run away and survive alone without a mother. Now that when it gets bad mc starts to act like a mc that trying to become a hero for some reason let me give you a story okay so mc runs away found a home with his sibling then they get hungry so the sibling decided that they should go hunt for food but mc say that it was not a good idea but they still did now they went to get food that when they get trap by werewolf while mc looked from afar while his siblings were catcher this was a lesson for them say the mc because of how they act now that this is going on mc starts to take action because his siblings knows what they did wrong but I just didn’t like the fact that when mc save them he starts to talk to his enemy and says “What are you trying to do” which sounds cringe as hell that’s because he’s already know what’s happening there was no need for that but after that mc try’s to look strong just to make them his servant something like that I can’t spell what I want so this well do anyway this was a big disappointment for me of how this novel turn out.