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Koko_Palibino

Koko_Palibino

male LV 10

Romance-Fantasy writer.

2023-11-09 Joined Philippines

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Koko_Palibino
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Hmm... The author has a potential in developing the story. I love how he tells what is going on with a scene however it is very crucial to edit the story or read it twice before posting so you can see if there are grammatical errors. The author always forgets punctuations (") after the character's conversation. Still, I enjoy reading it so far. I hope the author will keep on updating the story. [img=update][img=recommend]

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Koko_Palibino
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Forgot the (") to her speech.

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I like how the author narrates the story but can lessen mentioning Aiden's name. You can introduce him once and you can use 'He' moving forward. I'm sure the reader knows from there who's the character in the current scene.

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Koko_Palibino
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Whooaahhh cool

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Lightning Dragon

Lightning Dragon

Fantasy · NTNova

Koko_Palibino
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Owkeeeyyy Elsaaa

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"I am Elsa, the lightning dragon."

Lightning Dragon

Lightning Dragon

Fantasy · NTNova

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Lightning Dragon

Lightning Dragon

Fantasy · NTNova

Koko_Palibino
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That was fast.

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Lightning Dragon

Lightning Dragon

Fantasy · NTNova

Koko_Palibino
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Okay dadde

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Lightning Dragon

Lightning Dragon

Fantasy · NTNova

Koko_Palibino
Koko_Palibino
Koko_Palibino
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How do they awakened?

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Lightning Dragon

Lightning Dragon

Fantasy · NTNova

Koko_Palibino
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sounds interesting...

After about twenty years of constant losses, humanity found hope, as people began awakening genetic abilities. The Meta energy that caused the animals to mutate, also caused the latent genes of humans to awaken. Though humans are far from being able to defeat the beasts, they were able to rebuild a smaller new society where people could stay.

Lightning Dragon

Lightning Dragon

Fantasy · NTNova

Koko_Palibino
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Oh sheet [img=faceslap]

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Lightning Dragon

Lightning Dragon

Fantasy · NTNova

Koko_Palibino
Koko_Palibino
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I would smash the face for him lol

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Lightning Dragon

Lightning Dragon

Fantasy · NTNova

Koko_Palibino
Koko_Palibino
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Alright, witty 🥴

"Will…," the beautiful lady muttered. "From now on, your name will be William. William von Ainsworth."

Reincarnated With The Strongest System

Reincarnated With The Strongest System

Fantasy · Elyon

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