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ch 28 Chapter Twenty Eight- Running From A Tanuki Part 2
Anime & Comics · CYANOMN1VORE
thx for chapter
ch 0 1 [1] Talent System
Anime & Comics · Justice_Of_Love
it mean?
[Talent: Natural Ambidextrous]
Anime & Comics · Justice_Of_Love
i think u introduce teams play too soon. in the beginning I just want to know more about MC, how he be this strong,what he have that make him MC of this story,what set him apart form the rest players. and romantic relationships too, I thought u would build some soil posanality of the characters before progress to a romantic arc or something
ch 10 Chapter 9: Departure
Anime & Comics · Rinchan7
give it more details in fighting scenes bro, u wrote it like aftermath of battle instead of some action
ch 0 6 Chapter 5: In the Forest
Anime & Comics · Rinchan7
more!
ch 0 3 Chapter 2: Quest
Anime & Comics · Rinchan7
Thx for the chapter
ch 0 2 Chapter 1: Link Start
Anime & Comics · Rinchan7
he starts to babysit Ethan and basically goes with the flows of the story. he knows there is more of a demons contacter in school yet he is not doing anything to bring them out at all. he just waits for the opportunity to come instead of making one and when someone gonna try to attack him directly or indirectly he just standing there doing nothing to 'gather more information ' like in the mine arc. he just leave the seeds of problems alone. and recently u focus on romantic relationships with many girls but with the way u make mc posanality composed, introvert want to be alone,don't care about how people's think of him. it just ruin story bro
ch 354 Chapter 82.3 - What the heart sees
Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer
i think i'll start hating MC. he going to part of Beta mc
ch 354 Chapter 82.3 - What the heart sees
Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer
It's just a gamer system boi. u system don't have anything unique
The system is really powerful, just seeing my knowledge increase like in a game, as well as time limited learning bonuses, made me want to study and learn...' I thought surprised. I thought, surprised.
Fantasy · NunuXD
don't introduce a super natural please .
ch 0 2 02 - Change
Fantasy · NunuXD
he said ' Chaka available for everyone to use ' no?
'Must be because his Chakra has been unlocked. It can't be helped. With him awakening his Sharingan and unlocking his chakra, there is only one path that he could follow.' Miwa thought.
Anime & Comics · Sidecharacter1
eh and why there are civilians in naruto tho and daimyos can just raise their own shinobis not go hire some hidden villages as create it basically inverted it in one go on other hand hire hidden villages there is no 100% royalty just one of their missions
'Must be because his Chakra has been unlocked. It can't be helped. With him awakening his Sharingan and unlocking his chakra, there is only one path that he could follow.' Miwa thought.
Anime & Comics · Sidecharacter1
again with root excuse to hide Mc power. just go to the academy, perform good enough to cast a three hokage eyes, find a good sensei and form connection .
This thought did not bore well with him. Not because of the lack of resources for self-improvement but due to no backing as he knew the moment he would show a speck of talent the root forces would come calling.
Anime & Comics · Sidecharacter1
thanks for the chapter!
ch 22 [22] Tempest
Blue Lock: Talent System
Anime & Comics · Justice_Of_Love