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Chapter 2: Chapter 0.1|Prologue - ERROR! [Part2]

"Ha!"

"That's what you get!"

"How dare you mess with my baby!"

"Torture him!!"

Inside the brightly lit room, a young boy around the age of 17 lay on a big white and grey canopy bed, the boy was lying on his stomach, swaying his legs in the air, he was wearing a very big grey t-shirt, his long silvery-white hair laid loosely on the bed, his light blue and gold peach blossom eyes sparkled as he read his book, he rolled on the bed excitedly, his soft milky white cheek was tinted with a slightly reddish, pinkish color.

The boy's name is Hei Xiu, he is currently reading one of his favorite bl QT novels, and yes, he is a fudanshi.

Hei Xiu is a Dominant Omega, he's very shy and introverted, he also doesn't like to go outside if it isn't necessary due to past traumas.

Hei Xiu's parents raised him with care and love while his two big brothers are very protective of him, but because of one incident, Hei Xiu became afraid of the outside world and would dare not come out on his own violation.

While Hei Xiu was so immersed in his reading, he didn't notice the strange white fluffy creature appearing out of nowhere.

[Unkown Creature: Hello host, I am Regret system 689]

Hei Xu jumped in fright when he heard a voice that seemed to come out from nowhere, he tried to follow the sound and looked up; hovering above his head was a beautiful snow-white fox, Hei Xu was fascinated and felt tempted to touch the unknown creature's soft-looking fur, "h- hello" Hei Xu shyly greeted, "c- can I touch your f-fur?" he asked very shyly, he really wanted to touch the strange creature.

System 689: "..."

System 689 looked at its shy new host, it silently sighed as it agreed to its host's request.

[System 689: Yes, you can]

Hei Xu blushed as reached out both his hands to gently hold the fox, he sighed very satisfied "sigh~ so soft" he mumbled as his slender fingers gently ran through the fox's fur, he then rubbed his cheek lightly on the fox, "so comfortable" his cheek turned light pink as he continued to rub his cheek on the little white fox.

Hei Xiu's eyes misted as he started to feel drowsy, slowly his eyes started to close "I'm... haaa- mhn... tired" with that, he slept peacefully.

[System 689: sigh- I guess we can continue this later..]

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The next day

"mhn~"

"What a nice dream, I slept well last night!" Hei Xiu said with a big lively smile on his face.

[System 689: Σ( ̄. ̄ノ) Speak for yourself, my back is killing me! (o´Д`)]

Hei Xiu blushed heavily and apologized "s- sorry" he hadn't slept that good in a while and actually forgot about the poor little creature, Hei Xiu lowered his head in shame, and with watery eyes, he struggled to put his words together "I- I"

"P-Please don't h-h-hate me! I- I'm sorry, I really am... sob sob" Hei Xiu quickly said, he isn't really good with words and hence struggles a lot when talking to his family on a daily basis.

[System 689: N-no, it's okay, I was just kidding (;´Д`)]

System 689: This host takes everything too seriously! (;-_-)

"R- really? Are you sure?" Hei Xiu asked nervously.

[System 689: a 100%!]

"I, see..." he softly said with his head down.

"S- so... you're a system? Like in those transmigration novels?" he lifted his head and asked Hei Xiu with sparkly eyes.

[System 689: Yes, I am, ( ̄▽ ̄)ノ just like the one in those QT novels you like to read (〃⌒∇⌒)]

"Cool!" Hei Xiu said excitedly, his eyes sparkled even more and his cheek turned slightly red "s- so, what kind of system are you?" asked with curious eyes.

System 689: looks like he's opening up to me a little more, that's good. ૮ ˶ᵔ ᵕ ᵔ˶ ა

[System 689: like I said the last time, I'm Regret system 689, our mission is to help and fulfill whatever regret the client has.]

"That's so nice!"

1 Week Later

"AnAn, I hope we can stay together forever" Hei Xiu lightly laid his head on little AnAn (the fox), his eyelids about to close.

[AnAn: Me too host, I- ^%@$$%^&@*^*!((!%@&*@&@ ERROR! ERROR!]

[AnAn: System Restarting...1% ...2% ...3%...]

[AnAn: ERROR! ERROR! RESTARTING FAILED!]

[Connecting to Systems Core... 1%... 2%... 3%...]

[AnAn: CONNECTING FAILED!]

[Entering Sleep Mode... 1%... 2%... 3%...]

[AnAn: System Shutting down]

Hei Xiu looked at the system worriedly and asked "AnAn? a-are you okay?" he had a very bad promotion that something is about to happen, "AnAn? AnAn? Please answer me! don't, sniff... don't ignore me... please... don't leave me..." Hei Xiu desperately pleaded with AnAn as tears rolled down uncontrollably from his eyes unto his cheek.

CLANG!

CLANG!

Thick black chains started to for around the system caging it inside, black mist came out of nowhere and started to form into a person.

"Well, well, what do, we, have, here?" said a mysterious person with a smirk on his face, he walked up to Hei Xiu, his tall body towering over him (HX) as he pinched his (HX) chin "what a cute little host" his smile grew wider.

Hei Xiu's body trembled under the intimidating pressure of the mysterious person, and his red-rimed eyes started to leak tears even more, "w-what did y-you do to m-my AnAn?"

"Oh? Nothing that you should know" a playful smirk formed on the mysterious person's lips as he half gently patted Hei Xiu's cheek leaving a slightly red mark "I'm your new system, the 'Tragic Ending system'"

"T-tragic?"

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On the floor lay a semi-transparent body, his hair was scattered messily on the floor and his face, Hei Xiu was laying on his back and his face was turned facing the door, his eyes slightly open.

The door opened as Hei Xiu's personal servant Xiao Mei (or MeiMei) came in "Gasp! Young Master! Young Master What Happened!" the servant questioned as she rushed the Hei Xiu's side, she took him in her arms and yelled for help "SOMEBODY! GET THE MADAM! SOMETHING HAPPENED TO 3rd YOUNG MASTER! HURRY UP! Pls... sniff, sniff"

5 minutes later both Mother and Father Hei came rushing into the room "What Happened!" asked Hei's Mother as she took her son from Xiao Mei's hand.

____

In a dull grey room, laid half of Hei Xiu's soul, both his hands and legs were chained with thick black and gold chain made especially for locking up souls, his eyes were covered by a black piece of cloth blinding him from seeing anything. The mysterious person smiled evilly at Hei Xiu "let's make you a new body, shall we?"

.

.

.

The mysterious person walked back a little staring at Hei Xiu's new body "per~fect", there wasn't really much of a change to Hei Xiu's body compared to how he originally looked, the only thing that did change is the sensitivity to his body.

The mysterious teleported directly in front of Hei Xiu and his hands started to roam around his (HX) body "Ah! W-what are you doing? mm~"

"Of course, I'm testing you out obviously," said the mysterious person as his hand continued to roam around Hei Xiu's body until it stopped at his two little pink peaks, he twisted and flicked the two little beads until they turned bright red in color forcing out sweet uncontrollable moans from Hei Xiu's cherry red lips, he then started the lick and suck on them one by one as if milk would come out.

The mysterious person lubricated his fingers with magic and started to probe Hei Xiu's entrance, Hei Xiu's pink entrance shrank in fright at the foreign object forcing its way in 'n- no, p-please stop..." tears ran down Hei Xiu's face as he desperately tried to plead with the mysterious person who in turn ignored him.

Not long after the mysterious person entered one finger, he entered another, stretching the poor little hole that was trying to fight against it to no avail.

"Ah- ah~ no~ mnh~" Hei Xiu tried to resist, but the never before felt pleasure got to him as he weakly gave in.

When the mysterious person felt that he had stretched his (HX) chrysanthemum enough, he took out his huge length and aimed it at the entrance.

Hei Xiu who felt this huge member at his entrance was terrified and started to struggle "no, No! Please, it's not gonna fit! No Sto-! AHHH!!"

Not caring about Hei Xiu, the mysterious person forced his way in, tearing the poor little chrysanthemum hole, the tight hole squeezed the sex organ that invaded it, desperately trying to get it out.

The mysterious person started to vigorously pound his length in and out of the hole, caring only about the pleasure he is receiving.

"Ah! It hurts... It hurts so much..."

.

.

.

"Half of his soul is missing," a tall man dressed in a long white lab coat said "I'm assuming that person purposely took only half"

"Is there any way we could get it back?" asked Mother Hei worriedly.

"There is a way, but, it'll take a while and I don't know if you want to go through with it"

.

.

.

Hei Xiu was now placed in a doggy position and is still being fcked ruthlessly by the mysterious person, his hands were pulled back as the hard length pounded into his hole creating a sticky mess.

"Ah ha~ I... Ngh~ s-stop, I, can't take it any... Mh! Ah~!"

'no... I'm... gonna get... pregnant'

Hei Xiu, whose body already adjusted to the hard pounding was now moaning in pleasure, his prostate being pounded on simultaneously squirted out lewd liquid. Hei Xiu spasmed involuntarily as lewd liquid overflowed from his back hole, the mysterious man slowed down a little only to speed up again, he didn't care about the spasming and sensitive young boy under him.

Hei Xiu didn't know how many times he squirted and cumed, he didn't even remember when they stopped, the pleasure was too much for an inexperienced boy like Hei Xiu, the amount of times he fainted is countless.

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A/N: Couldn't stop myself from writing a little smut, it goes in line with the plot anyway so... Adieu! See you in the >>Next Chapter!<<

Btw, does anyone have a nice name for the surname Mu?


CREATORS' THOUGHTS
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Can anyone give me a name for the surname Mu? I'm honestly out of ideas, and... brother google isn't really helping me much right now.

Btw, the first part of this novel is based on when Hei Xiu gets the Tragic Ending system.

I don't know if I should make a second book with the Regret System, or just continue that in this book?

Pls, forgive me if there are any grammar mistakes.

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