我是同性

LV 3

HadesOnDrugs

It's only first chapter so i can't tell how good the novel but you got a good first impression and i like the "isekai'd author genre" novels. But your novel has great amout of similarities to your fanfic and the novel Authors POV(greatest novel of all time). It's good to be inspired from other works but dont make it a like a cheap copy from China. Take ideas and revolve them into something new. Overall I think your novel has great potential if you keep getting better at it.

LV 15

One_Winged_Angel

Can’t express enough good things about this novel. It reminds me of a few comics I’ve read and cannot wait to see how the story unravels. There a few grammatical errors but nothing that detracts from the story. It doesn’t prevent it from being a nice and easy read. Absolutely top notch world building so far, it’s a really interesting story so far and I cannot wait to see how it progresses

LV 1

_inzie

Good writing!! It provides all the necessarily world building needed. Truck-Kun did a good job taking out the 'Extra'. Interested in seeing what path the 'Extra' decides to take. Will it be the MC route or the cowering Cannon fodder.