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Needs to improve writing quality with the progress of the novel. Fanfictions like this are common so he needs to add a unique traits that developed the story in its own unique way. All the best and thanks for the chapters and try to update a bit more frequently.
VERY GOOD 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 NEXT NEXT NEXT NEXT NEXT NEXT NEXT NEXT NEXT NEXT NEXT NEXT MEXT NEXT NEXT NEXT VERY GOOD 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 NEXT NEXT NEXT NEXT NEXT NEXT NEXT NEXT NEXT NEXT NEXT NEXT MEXT NEXT NEXT NEXT
Reveal Spoiler Needs to improve writing quality with the progress of the novel. Fanfictions like this are common so he needs to add a unique traits that developed the story in its own unique way. All the best and thanks for the chapters and try to update a bit more frequently.
Good chapter thanks to the Author for his work. . . .