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Woah, the story's so good. It's the first time I read something like this. A program that became human. Very interesting. The characters' personalities are funny and cute at the same time. Good work! 🥰
Warning! Stop reading at true ending! Do not reading the alternative ending because you will want to strangled the author and shaking them while screaming "why oh why"
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I loved this story! The alternate ending neary made me cry. I love how the characters were designed and how they grew, and I really hope there is a sequel or will be one, one day possibly. It was such a lovely story.
Shameless Author here, with a shameless review. I wrote a novel recently, which is Reincarnate as Prince:Change Magical World with Industry. It was my very first attempt at writing, and there may be some mistakes and errors in it, but I still feel extremely proud of it and enjoy it thoroughly. Please give my story a try and leave some comments for me. Thank you! htt**://rb.gy/sxwmsa
it is just such a good story I just read all of it in one sitting, and im just shocked I loved this story so much it is absolutely amazing and it is definitely a must read
The alternative ending killed me :0 James is adorkable!!!! How can someone be so damn cute?! What about all the talking?! Gosh I practically have a boner 10 out of 10 simply perfect, a masterpiece!!!! Hope that you make a continuation! I'm waiting for my baby James (ᗒᗩᗕ)
Curse you author my heart hiccuped due to you! And that alt ending why!!!! Aughhhh Any one planning to read the comme ts to see how the short novel is guys its worth reading yeah it isnt too long but its good and gives you laughs and feels and theres angst and love its a good novel so enjoy it
Best comedy short story ever =D i'm glad you ended it with a happy ending instead of the alternative ending. lol does he really need does fonts thou? he could get new ones, more "fun ones" ;)
It's perfect for those trying to find a short humorous romance. It was funny and all that. Just that, I wish I had not read the alternate ending.
I'm not a tech/futuristic nerd to comment on the AI setting story, but damn this story is worth it! Too bad it was too short. Funny, heart warming, ****** but loveable plot that made me smile in the end. Hopefully the author would write more in the future
The story is so beautiful. I am touched. I almost cried. Haha I love it. Gosh. I just don't like the alternative ending though coz it made me want to cry..
O my stars! This is such an unexpected gem! And it' complete... awesome work author-San :) Only the world back ground gets a slightly lower rating... but that's understandably cuz of the novel length...
This is Truly great short story-perfect if you just want to read something sweet. 10/10 recommend giving it a go. World Background is just lower cause most of the story is focused on the relationship between the two chapters and not about the environment (ship) that they are on.
Would loved a longer story.................................................................................................................................
Aaaah I got attached to the characters too quickly I can't believe I finished reading it. It was a nice read, it would have been awesome if it was longer but at least the ending was satisfying. The characters are really lovely and likable. Some chapters were funny, some were sad but that was what made everything better, the thoughts and interactions between James and Koz made the story more realistic than I expected it to be. Overall I think this is very well-written, definitely worth a read.
Omg omg omg.. first one that I have felt that it warranted a review!! Please add more chapters!!! This cant be the end! It's just the beginning!! Please!!!
I love the book, this could easily be flushed out to a full novel instead of a short story, I loved the ending but to me it seams like that is just the beginning of their journey. Can he keep James safe, will the government try to change and or keep him? Will people accept there relationship? Do they release James base code to spread more of his kind to the universe? I hope to hear more about this cute couple.
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Haven't read all the chapters yet but then again I pretty much fell in love with the story within the first five chaps or so anyway. Beautifully written, poignant and sweet. And an absolutely fantastic sense of humour!
I dont know? I mean everyones review is so good so list this to my library but i just read two chap mostly intro about MC and the system. Although the review said the two chap is funny i didnt find it? Must re-read again i think.
The story is really emotional , I cried a lot in some chapters and laugh till the point of crying in some chapters ! I really enjoyed the story and was really happy about the ending as I was thinking it would end tragically !!😅The story is really nice 😍
I am a dog I love fried spring rolls! I like your novel! Take my 5 stars! Write more and publish new chapters everyday! Fried spring rolls is delicious when dipped in a sweet and spicy sauce! HAHAHA COMIC SANS MS FONT
Fun story with likable characters. I'm already afraid of outsiders meddling messing up the balance between the MC and the AI. I can see that ending in terrible disaster. Hurry and get James a body asap Kaz! I just found it and read all available chapters at once so I don't know what the update schedule is like.
Woah, the story's so good. It's the first time I read something like this. A program that became human. Very interesting. The characters' personalities are funny and cute at the same time. Good work! 🥰
Warning! Stop reading at true ending! Do not reading the alternative ending because you will want to strangled the author and shaking them while screaming "why oh why"
Reveal Spoiler I loved this story! The alternate ending neary made me cry. I love how the characters were designed and how they grew, and I really hope there is a sequel or will be one, one day possibly. It was such a lovely story.
Shameless Author here, with a shameless review. I wrote a novel recently, which is Reincarnate as Prince:Change Magical World with Industry. It was my very first attempt at writing, and there may be some mistakes and errors in it, but I still feel extremely proud of it and enjoy it thoroughly. Please give my story a try and leave some comments for me. Thank you! htt**://rb.gy/sxwmsa
it is just such a good story I just read all of it in one sitting, and im just shocked I loved this story so much it is absolutely amazing and it is definitely a must read
The alternative ending killed me :0 James is adorkable!!!! How can someone be so damn cute?! What about all the talking?! Gosh I practically have a boner 10 out of 10 simply perfect, a masterpiece!!!! Hope that you make a continuation! I'm waiting for my baby James (ᗒᗩᗕ)
Curse you author my heart hiccuped due to you! And that alt ending why!!!! Aughhhh Any one planning to read the comme ts to see how the short novel is guys its worth reading yeah it isnt too long but its good and gives you laughs and feels and theres angst and love its a good novel so enjoy it
Best comedy short story ever =D i'm glad you ended it with a happy ending instead of the alternative ending. lol does he really need does fonts thou? he could get new ones, more "fun ones" ;)
It's perfect for those trying to find a short humorous romance. It was funny and all that. Just that, I wish I had not read the alternate ending.
I'm not a tech/futuristic nerd to comment on the AI setting story, but damn this story is worth it! Too bad it was too short. Funny, heart warming, ****** but loveable plot that made me smile in the end. Hopefully the author would write more in the future
The story is so beautiful. I am touched. I almost cried. Haha I love it. Gosh. I just don't like the alternative ending though coz it made me want to cry..
O my stars! This is such an unexpected gem! And it' complete... awesome work author-San :) Only the world back ground gets a slightly lower rating... but that's understandably cuz of the novel length...
This is Truly great short story-perfect if you just want to read something sweet. 10/10 recommend giving it a go. World Background is just lower cause most of the story is focused on the relationship between the two chapters and not about the environment (ship) that they are on.
Would loved a longer story.................................................................................................................................
Aaaah I got attached to the characters too quickly I can't believe I finished reading it. It was a nice read, it would have been awesome if it was longer but at least the ending was satisfying. The characters are really lovely and likable. Some chapters were funny, some were sad but that was what made everything better, the thoughts and interactions between James and Koz made the story more realistic than I expected it to be. Overall I think this is very well-written, definitely worth a read.
Omg omg omg.. first one that I have felt that it warranted a review!! Please add more chapters!!! This cant be the end! It's just the beginning!! Please!!!
I love the book, this could easily be flushed out to a full novel instead of a short story, I loved the ending but to me it seams like that is just the beginning of their journey. Can he keep James safe, will the government try to change and or keep him? Will people accept there relationship? Do they release James base code to spread more of his kind to the universe? I hope to hear more about this cute couple.
Reveal Spoiler Haven't read all the chapters yet but then again I pretty much fell in love with the story within the first five chaps or so anyway. Beautifully written, poignant and sweet. And an absolutely fantastic sense of humour!
I dont know? I mean everyones review is so good so list this to my library but i just read two chap mostly intro about MC and the system. Although the review said the two chap is funny i didnt find it? Must re-read again i think.
The story is really emotional , I cried a lot in some chapters and laugh till the point of crying in some chapters ! I really enjoyed the story and was really happy about the ending as I was thinking it would end tragically !!😅The story is really nice 😍
I am a dog I love fried spring rolls! I like your novel! Take my 5 stars! Write more and publish new chapters everyday! Fried spring rolls is delicious when dipped in a sweet and spicy sauce! HAHAHA COMIC SANS MS FONT
Fun story with likable characters. I'm already afraid of outsiders meddling messing up the balance between the MC and the AI. I can see that ending in terrible disaster. Hurry and get James a body asap Kaz! I just found it and read all available chapters at once so I don't know what the update schedule is like.
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