Synopsis
SILVER TIER WINNER OF WPC #155
[MATURE CONTENT ALERT]
Excerpt-
"It doesn't fit, dear try harder," Wang Lily said to her hubby.
“Don’t worry, I know the size is right, it’ll fit my dear waifu” her husband assured her.
Suddenly she screamed from pain, “Ouch! Stupid what you are doing, it hurts!"
Her hubby tried appeasing her, “Haishh! How can this be, I know every inch of your body, my dear."
The words said by her hubby made her feel hot. However, the next words of his made her whack his head. and she did hit him.
"Maybe it is due to pregnancy your feet have become swollen."
"Ouch! Ouch! Dear, why are you hitting me?" asked her husband making pitiful, puppy faces in front of her.
"You are going to sleep outside tonight, how dare you call me fat!" Wang Lily angrily shouted and kicked her husband outside, successfully.
"It was all your fault that I'm like this."
“Dear, I’m sorry. I didn’t mean it. Please listen to me at least.” her husband keep begging while banging the door.
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It is said, "When two people are meant for each other, no time is too long, no distance is too far, no one can ever tear them apart."
Wang Lily started her new life. She only remembered the way she died. But her will to live and the promise of the man, whom she can't remember helped her move forward with her life.
With help of a cute little pet she slapped two faced bitches, her fiance and shut the mouth of people who were ridiculing her as an Ugly Trash.
Countless beast started trembling in front of cute pet and heaven defying skills of her made the whole world kneel before her.
With help of her black furnance, she can make rarest of rare medicines,pills or even poisons and beat shit out of the Great Alchemists.
He, had lost her again last time. But this time he is fully prepared to make her his bride. He vowed to love, protect, and pamper her and have their revenge on all people who killed his beloved and separated them.
Join the journey of our OP FL, how she starts her new life,, overcomes all the obstacles, kicks some asses, and stands at the top of the world with her beloved.
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Author's Note:
This is a sweet fluffy romance with cultivation, revenge, faceslaps.
I'm new to writing so please provide the story reviews, feedback, comments if any. I'm open to all your suggestions.
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Write a reviewWell! The starting is intriguing with some cliches. But it is well written. As the author is not experienced there are some mistakes here and there. However, overall the story seems good. Added to my library. Good luck dear Author.
The story is about the cultivation world where our dear FL transmigrates. However the twist is she did not remember who she was in past life when she died. She only had a glimpse on how she died and the mysterious man who tried to save her. Well, for now it is still in writing phase, so not more can be said. This review is based on only first 5 chapters. 😊
Till now on whatever I read, this sounds promising. Background is set well and character development is strong. FL's transmigration has caused her loose memory leading to a chronological unfolding of past events with current ones. Though the author is new, there are few grammatical errors but I am glad that she herself is admitting it. Apart from that, things are till now going great. Looking forward to read more and so recommend others to give it a shot!
............................................................ Not much of a Cultivation fan but yeah it's interesting. The Doting Parts are funny. The story got potential. Improvement in Sentence Construction needed. Keep up the Good word!
This novel sounds interesting. After reading first few chapters, I am going to add it to my library to see how will our FL move forward become OP and a lovey dovey couple with ML. Keep writing! !
Looks promising. Hope you will not drop this novel. Story is cliche for me but what I can I do. I am sucker for OP FL with cultivation background. Keep up the good work. You will improve with time. 😊😊
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The synopsis sounds interesting. Looking forward for an OP FL and doting ML. Although we have only a glimpse of ML in the starting, I am confirmed that he will be a doting husband. Our dear FL did not have any memory of her past life. She only remember how she died. And she also not seem overly cold FL. Looking forward to the story. 😊😊