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Dante_Fair

The author seems to forget the laws and rules of the world they established. The author forgets about characters or introduces characters that don't push the story forward. At times it felt like the Author didn't know what direction they wanted to go with the story.

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raingh
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if youve read a transmigrator youve read them all that being said only bad thing is the mc is a complete dumb*ss he joins a mage organization based on runes but hears how other people "who dont have a scanner in their head" find it hard to study them he just ignores them, till the author is like wop** plot armor

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Laughlin616

This is the first i have read all the way through it kept me ensnared with the alluring scenery and entertained with the development not only of the main character but all of the characters in the story.

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Clarkonator

I managed to get halfway through it before getting fed with discarding personal relationships just because they aren't central to the plot anymore - it is one thing to be busy and rarely see people important to the mc, but to have him basically forget all about them for long periods of time, and not even try to create relationships with people that should be important to him. It just left me feeling so empty that I had to stop reading this, and find a story where the mc has real feelings to make me feel betting inside (for the record, on this front, it went well in the beginning, it's just when the arc that develops the personal relationship (not just romantic) passes, he grows more and more distant with old characters, developing fewer and fewer character relationships as time passes

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Ak02
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Has too many repetitive sentences...Has too many repetitive sentences...Has too many repetitive sentences...Has too many repetitive sentences...Has too many repetitive sentences...

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DeletedAccoUnt

I have read till 600+ chapters ...Disappointed completely and utterly disappointed... he led every near him died.... charise.. avril.. emma... etc etc and he did not even react to it......by far the most disappointing mc in transmigration history.. dont waste your time reading this..... stupid mc with his worthless matrix..

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nichocolas

Barely worth reading For teenagers maybe ? Too many plot holes, characters design lacking, etc ...

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Spelloyal

This novel can't be caled "A wizard's Secret" anymore. The mc is no longer a wizard, he become a kind of cultivator with a inner dimension. Also the novel is continuing beyond what should go. I would have given 3 stars if the novel had stopped before the mc become a "trancender" and left his original multiverse to a bigger multiverse.

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francisachaliwie

A wizards secret is perhaps one of the very best story lines I have read on webnovel. The story is captured in a world full of magic and captivating drama driving the reader to a crescendo of reading ectacy . The story more importantly has valuable lessons to teach the reader, lessons of humility, hard work, perseverance and modesty to mention but a few. I in person believes the writer of this story is not a "simple human beings " , for it takes someone with a special knowledge to be able to pen down this great piece of work. Shalom.

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Stiizz
LV 15 Badge

Finished the novel and i got to say, it was one hell of a journey i tell you that. Novel starts of on a nice pace, not too slow nor too fast. The glorious matrix is utilized almost all the time during the early chapters but later on towards the end of the novel, the matrix is completely out.. so warning to matrix lovers out there! One thing to note is that the ending is forced. At least it felt that way... but overall its a decent read, just the ending is a but frustrating. ✌️✌️✌️

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IsekaiAddict

There is no system... There is no system... There is no system... There is no system... There is no system... There is no system... There is no system... There is no system... There is no system... There is no system... There is no system... There is no system... There is no system... There is no system... There is no system... There is no system... There is no system... There is no system... There is no system... There is no system... There is no system... There is no system... There is no system... There is no system...

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Zaver
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He een een jed uhhfuhh f if th ebbed uhh hmm een th uhh ext ggn Bec th uhh tv urn th ggn eggy rugs Utrecht th 8 uhh th th th ggn to hmm th to uhh

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GrandGuardian

This novel has one of the most powerful ending I have read! I actually thought the MC's ending would be a powerful spell caster but who would have expected!

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Michael_Pascher

Its a nice pice of work, but there are many things I dont like about it. I wont get into the problems I have tho. Overall its a nice work. Mp

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deanbunter88

Thanks for the novel 😁😊😊😄😉Good Night 💤🌙 😊 Sweet Dream 🌠🌠🌠🌠🌠🌠🌠 💤💤💤💤💤 ☁☁☁💤☁ ☁☁💤☁☁ ☁💤☁☁☁ 💤💤💤💤💤 ☁ Sleepy ☁ Good Night 💤🌙 😊 Sweet Dream 🌠🌠🌠🌠🌠🌠🌠 💤💤💤💤💤 ☁☁☁💤☁ ☁☁💤☁☁ ☁💤☁☁☁ 💤💤💤💤💤 ☁ Sleepy ☁

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OniSannn

Cooolllll novelllll mennnn! I love it so much! & & & & & & & & A A A A A A A A A A Aa

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Ignus106

A very good Novel to read. I suggest it to all that they give this novel a try. Character development is nice with various other civilizations around him. Also the story level up is also very well done. Looking forward to entire story.

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Sarhasrala

Overall i really enjoy this book. Towards the end it feels like its been rushed a lottle and there is a lot of random encounters or skills of the main character that just seem to be fillers and are redundant to the story. But oberall its a good read and i have liked it.

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Rober611

HURRY UP HURRY UP HURRY UP HURRY UP HURRY UP HURRY UP HURRY UP HURRY UP HURRY UP HURRY UP HURRY UP HURRY UP HURRY UP HURRY UP HURRY UP HURRY UP HURRY UP HURRY UP HURRY UP HURRY UP HURRY UP HURRY UP HURRY UP HURRY UP

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ThriceRecklessSong

This novel starts off relatively normal. His golden finger is a "quantum calculator" that is basically a glorified biochip, only ****tier. Those expecting this to be similar to Age of Adepts and Warlock of the Magus World would be sorely disappointed. Around 2/3 of the story is about MC being a cool wizard but crashes down near the end. Just like most cultivation novels MC becomes like a god. Spoiler time : This novel is similar to Wizard World, a very horrible novel that has no sense in what it wants to do. This novel on the other hand lost its direction near the end or rather the author wanted to milk it for all its worth by repeating everything with the formula more stronger enemies even when they did not make sense. At the very least WW knew when to stop this garbage just kept on going. If it had rank after Supreme Creator author might have extended it even more. MC also journeys alone, everyone else is insignificant aside from maybe Titus which he found near the time this novel started going bad. He basically stopped being a Wizard at that point. Read something better.

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rorschach

Oh my god, the story plot is so good! This is my first light novel that touched me to the core.. character development, strength development, the large scale description, the same enthusiasm as the beginning when the story got to its last phase. The story was so stable , so entertaining. There are times when i just leave a book half way because the story becomes monotonous towards the end and there is no precise direction the story is going. But this one, i gotta admit, this story never strayed off the path, till the end, the MC had one goal and the steps he went through to achieve it , oh my god, so thorough , so detailed. I love it.. i m going to follow this author now.. thank you so much....

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Chally_Vuddi

24 HOURS  LOVE SPELL CASTER (DR. GBOJIE) THAT HELPED ME BRING BACK LOVER  CONTACT HIM NOW FOR ANY KIND OF HELP I want to give a big thanks to a great spell caster commonly known as DR Gbojie for the great spiritual prayers he did in my life by bringing my ex-lover back to me after many months of breakup and loneliness. With this, I am convinced that you are sent to this word to rescue people from heartbreaks and also to help us get the solution to every relationship problem. for those of you out there who have one relationship problem or the other why not contact DR Gbojie. that is the best place you can solve all your problems, including a lack of jobs and promotions, binding and marriage spells, divorce and attraction spells, anxiety and depression problems, good luck and lotto spells, fertility, and pregnancy spells, and also the business success and customer increase, winning court cases and many more. contact him at gbojiespiritualtemple@gmail.com  , gbojiespiritualtemple@yahoo.com or contact mobile contact +2349066410185 I highly recommend his services.  website :  http://gbojiespiritualtemple.website2.me/ kind regards

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ifritkumbh

Story is very good. Character is also very good, it has some flaws Like author doesn't explain many things some times. But i like to read it anyway bcoz i want more and more good story to read so it doesn't matter to me.

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David_Drake

The beginning was strong. I was able to stand the over protective sister, his fatty friend and his typical easy going attitude. However, once you added the 'Matrix' chip, it went down hill. By then there was arrogant villains, face slapping, not using his AI chip until the last possible second and typical stupidity on the MC. Like who the hell keeps going out with out any guards. Even if he believes his level 0 spell can protect him, you made the whole country into xenophobia murderers who'd stick a shiv into his back. And you know what is worse, its how the MC keeps willingly walking into ambushes. Getting by with luck and plot armor with his amazing chinese face slapping powers.

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Emi_Ozner

This is one of those books that I wanted to do well. I wanted the characters to shine and I wanted the plots to be gritty and the magic and world to drown me. But sadly, after a couple of chapters in, I had to put it down. I pushed through it but it didn't really get me. The author had the world building down, he set it up right, the execution was just not there. The MC was not that great as well. I couldn't even describe the MC if someone asked me about him. Sad.

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Lebelo

The **** is this ****. I havent even seen the computer and I already dropped it.-------------------------------------------------------------

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klle
LV 1 Badge

Absolutely waste of time, yes the first till he consolidated his ultimate maxim was good plot and i like it but that's all after he became a longitude traveler? is he even a wizard? No, that's all a waste of time after that he go to a world where you can cultivate your form of your chosen monster but it has nothing to do with being wizard. I still bear with it but when he became a world something I forgot (it's a realm but i forgot about that ) the action became super boring, why? because it's simple Merlin said when you reach this realm there's no fighting will happen, because it's only collision of worlds if you have 10 more worlds than other then you win. Absolutely waste of time, after I read that **** theb I dropped the novel.

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Spelloyal

i really liked this novel, i isnt the best you can find but it is very good. unfortunately the most recent chapters forgot that mc is a wizard, so the title "Wizard´s secret" it´s just for part of the novel

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strelking

Pretty good so far. The chapter are organize. The story is fun and very interesting to read. A lot of suspense and the Power level of the characters or NPC of this novel are well organize.

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Dante_Fair

The author seems to forget the laws and rules of the world they established. The author forgets about characters or introduces characters that don't push the story forward. At times it felt like the Author didn't know what direction they wanted to go with the story.

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raingh
LV 13 Badge

if youve read a transmigrator youve read them all that being said only bad thing is the mc is a complete dumb*ss he joins a mage organization based on runes but hears how other people "who dont have a scanner in their head" find it hard to study them he just ignores them, till the author is like wop** plot armor

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Laughlin616

This is the first i have read all the way through it kept me ensnared with the alluring scenery and entertained with the development not only of the main character but all of the characters in the story.

5yr
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Clarkonator

I managed to get halfway through it before getting fed with discarding personal relationships just because they aren't central to the plot anymore - it is one thing to be busy and rarely see people important to the mc, but to have him basically forget all about them for long periods of time, and not even try to create relationships with people that should be important to him. It just left me feeling so empty that I had to stop reading this, and find a story where the mc has real feelings to make me feel betting inside (for the record, on this front, it went well in the beginning, it's just when the arc that develops the personal relationship (not just romantic) passes, he grows more and more distant with old characters, developing fewer and fewer character relationships as time passes

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Ak02
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Has too many repetitive sentences...Has too many repetitive sentences...Has too many repetitive sentences...Has too many repetitive sentences...Has too many repetitive sentences...

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DeletedAccoUnt

I have read till 600+ chapters ...Disappointed completely and utterly disappointed... he led every near him died.... charise.. avril.. emma... etc etc and he did not even react to it......by far the most disappointing mc in transmigration history.. dont waste your time reading this..... stupid mc with his worthless matrix..

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nichocolas

Barely worth reading For teenagers maybe ? Too many plot holes, characters design lacking, etc ...

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Spelloyal

This novel can't be caled "A wizard's Secret" anymore. The mc is no longer a wizard, he become a kind of cultivator with a inner dimension. Also the novel is continuing beyond what should go. I would have given 3 stars if the novel had stopped before the mc become a "trancender" and left his original multiverse to a bigger multiverse.

5yr
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francisachaliwie

A wizards secret is perhaps one of the very best story lines I have read on webnovel. The story is captured in a world full of magic and captivating drama driving the reader to a crescendo of reading ectacy . The story more importantly has valuable lessons to teach the reader, lessons of humility, hard work, perseverance and modesty to mention but a few. I in person believes the writer of this story is not a "simple human beings " , for it takes someone with a special knowledge to be able to pen down this great piece of work. Shalom.

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Stiizz
LV 15 Badge

Finished the novel and i got to say, it was one hell of a journey i tell you that. Novel starts of on a nice pace, not too slow nor too fast. The glorious matrix is utilized almost all the time during the early chapters but later on towards the end of the novel, the matrix is completely out.. so warning to matrix lovers out there! One thing to note is that the ending is forced. At least it felt that way... but overall its a decent read, just the ending is a but frustrating. ✌️✌️✌️

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IsekaiAddict

There is no system... There is no system... There is no system... There is no system... There is no system... There is no system... There is no system... There is no system... There is no system... There is no system... There is no system... There is no system... There is no system... There is no system... There is no system... There is no system... There is no system... There is no system... There is no system... There is no system... There is no system... There is no system... There is no system... There is no system...

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Zaver
LV 7 Badge

He een een jed uhhfuhh f if th ebbed uhh hmm een th uhh ext ggn Bec th uhh tv urn th ggn eggy rugs Utrecht th 8 uhh th th th ggn to hmm th to uhh

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GrandGuardian

This novel has one of the most powerful ending I have read! I actually thought the MC's ending would be a powerful spell caster but who would have expected!

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Michael_Pascher

Its a nice pice of work, but there are many things I dont like about it. I wont get into the problems I have tho. Overall its a nice work. Mp

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deanbunter88

Thanks for the novel 😁😊😊😄😉Good Night 💤🌙 😊 Sweet Dream 🌠🌠🌠🌠🌠🌠🌠 💤💤💤💤💤 ☁☁☁💤☁ ☁☁💤☁☁ ☁💤☁☁☁ 💤💤💤💤💤 ☁ Sleepy ☁ Good Night 💤🌙 😊 Sweet Dream 🌠🌠🌠🌠🌠🌠🌠 💤💤💤💤💤 ☁☁☁💤☁ ☁☁💤☁☁ ☁💤☁☁☁ 💤💤💤💤💤 ☁ Sleepy ☁

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OniSannn

Cooolllll novelllll mennnn! I love it so much! & & & & & & & & A A A A A A A A A A Aa

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Ignus106

A very good Novel to read. I suggest it to all that they give this novel a try. Character development is nice with various other civilizations around him. Also the story level up is also very well done. Looking forward to entire story.

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Sarhasrala

Overall i really enjoy this book. Towards the end it feels like its been rushed a lottle and there is a lot of random encounters or skills of the main character that just seem to be fillers and are redundant to the story. But oberall its a good read and i have liked it.

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Rober611

HURRY UP HURRY UP HURRY UP HURRY UP HURRY UP HURRY UP HURRY UP HURRY UP HURRY UP HURRY UP HURRY UP HURRY UP HURRY UP HURRY UP HURRY UP HURRY UP HURRY UP HURRY UP HURRY UP HURRY UP HURRY UP HURRY UP HURRY UP HURRY UP

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ThriceRecklessSong

This novel starts off relatively normal. His golden finger is a "quantum calculator" that is basically a glorified biochip, only ****tier. Those expecting this to be similar to Age of Adepts and Warlock of the Magus World would be sorely disappointed. Around 2/3 of the story is about MC being a cool wizard but crashes down near the end. Just like most cultivation novels MC becomes like a god. Spoiler time : This novel is similar to Wizard World, a very horrible novel that has no sense in what it wants to do. This novel on the other hand lost its direction near the end or rather the author wanted to milk it for all its worth by repeating everything with the formula more stronger enemies even when they did not make sense. At the very least WW knew when to stop this garbage just kept on going. If it had rank after Supreme Creator author might have extended it even more. MC also journeys alone, everyone else is insignificant aside from maybe Titus which he found near the time this novel started going bad. He basically stopped being a Wizard at that point. Read something better.

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rorschach

Oh my god, the story plot is so good! This is my first light novel that touched me to the core.. character development, strength development, the large scale description, the same enthusiasm as the beginning when the story got to its last phase. The story was so stable , so entertaining. There are times when i just leave a book half way because the story becomes monotonous towards the end and there is no precise direction the story is going. But this one, i gotta admit, this story never strayed off the path, till the end, the MC had one goal and the steps he went through to achieve it , oh my god, so thorough , so detailed. I love it.. i m going to follow this author now.. thank you so much....

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Chally_Vuddi

24 HOURS  LOVE SPELL CASTER (DR. GBOJIE) THAT HELPED ME BRING BACK LOVER  CONTACT HIM NOW FOR ANY KIND OF HELP I want to give a big thanks to a great spell caster commonly known as DR Gbojie for the great spiritual prayers he did in my life by bringing my ex-lover back to me after many months of breakup and loneliness. With this, I am convinced that you are sent to this word to rescue people from heartbreaks and also to help us get the solution to every relationship problem. for those of you out there who have one relationship problem or the other why not contact DR Gbojie. that is the best place you can solve all your problems, including a lack of jobs and promotions, binding and marriage spells, divorce and attraction spells, anxiety and depression problems, good luck and lotto spells, fertility, and pregnancy spells, and also the business success and customer increase, winning court cases and many more. contact him at gbojiespiritualtemple@gmail.com  , gbojiespiritualtemple@yahoo.com or contact mobile contact +2349066410185 I highly recommend his services.  website :  http://gbojiespiritualtemple.website2.me/ kind regards

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ifritkumbh

Story is very good. Character is also very good, it has some flaws Like author doesn't explain many things some times. But i like to read it anyway bcoz i want more and more good story to read so it doesn't matter to me.

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David_Drake

The beginning was strong. I was able to stand the over protective sister, his fatty friend and his typical easy going attitude. However, once you added the 'Matrix' chip, it went down hill. By then there was arrogant villains, face slapping, not using his AI chip until the last possible second and typical stupidity on the MC. Like who the hell keeps going out with out any guards. Even if he believes his level 0 spell can protect him, you made the whole country into xenophobia murderers who'd stick a shiv into his back. And you know what is worse, its how the MC keeps willingly walking into ambushes. Getting by with luck and plot armor with his amazing chinese face slapping powers.

5yr
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Emi_Ozner

This is one of those books that I wanted to do well. I wanted the characters to shine and I wanted the plots to be gritty and the magic and world to drown me. But sadly, after a couple of chapters in, I had to put it down. I pushed through it but it didn't really get me. The author had the world building down, he set it up right, the execution was just not there. The MC was not that great as well. I couldn't even describe the MC if someone asked me about him. Sad.

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Lebelo

The **** is this ****. I havent even seen the computer and I already dropped it.-------------------------------------------------------------

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klle
LV 1 Badge

Absolutely waste of time, yes the first till he consolidated his ultimate maxim was good plot and i like it but that's all after he became a longitude traveler? is he even a wizard? No, that's all a waste of time after that he go to a world where you can cultivate your form of your chosen monster but it has nothing to do with being wizard. I still bear with it but when he became a world something I forgot (it's a realm but i forgot about that ) the action became super boring, why? because it's simple Merlin said when you reach this realm there's no fighting will happen, because it's only collision of worlds if you have 10 more worlds than other then you win. Absolutely waste of time, after I read that **** theb I dropped the novel.

5yr
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Spelloyal

i really liked this novel, i isnt the best you can find but it is very good. unfortunately the most recent chapters forgot that mc is a wizard, so the title "Wizard´s secret" it´s just for part of the novel

5yr
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strelking

Pretty good so far. The chapter are organize. The story is fun and very interesting to read. A lot of suspense and the Power level of the characters or NPC of this novel are well organize.

5yr
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