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Mercenary System

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Author: RisingDoom

4.11 (35 ratings)

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Leon used to be a Special Ops agent, one of the best agent in his country. After 10 years of service he retired from his profession and wanted to live a normal life, get normal job, be married to a beautiful wife and to have children.

Until the car that he's driving fell off the a cliff because the brake din't work. During in the midst of the fall time seems to have slow down. Leon suddenly cursed in his thought "F*ck! if survive this fall i will definitely kill the person that cut off the brake cable, or if I reincarnate I'm gonna find the one who did this and kill him. Sigh, if I survive this crisis I'm gonna find a beauty of a wife and mistress then have as many children that i want."


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Rooz
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MC reincarnated in a different world, with magic and qi. Looks like a harem, concidering that MC already described himself as unfaithful and mentioned the size of his manhood in the very beginning. I'm writing this because info section is very nondescript and gives no real idea of what's this novel all about. Looks like a generic system novel. Writing quality is meh, haven't read enough to rate the world building. On a plus side - consistent daily updates. I'm not going to continue reading this novel, and only writing this review to save others some of their time.

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RisingDoom

Hope you guys enjoyed my novel. So far the plot still slows in pace and it will get going soon. This novel was inspired by MGSV so expect that there will be some similarities with it. Of course, there will be no METAL GEAR so don't expect. Hope for your continued support.

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UndeadBerserker

Expecting a bit more when read title and description, but already read 20 chapters and really disappointed. MC supposed to be some elite special operative yet acts like a teenager, actions he takes seem to be more focused on MC being "cool" than being tactful. Spec ops are supposed to blend in not draw attention, experts in recon, yet MC immediately makes ******* choices that don't match up with a Spec ops mentality. Author had good ideas in novel, however seems like they didn't organize their plot and went more with what he thought of at moment. Pretty harsh review, but what I honestly think.

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MaxwellKHA

This novel is great for those who wanted to read isekai vs modern weapon. My thought on this novel is that this novel is all good as far as you don't read it at your work place. NSFW in some part, but it still acceptable and well written. The only downside is the author is on hiatus. Thank you for writing. Keep up the good work.

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Steven_Beck

This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it thank you

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kruid1969

Writing Quality good 💥💥💥💥 Stability of Updates slow💥💥💥 Story Development good💥💥💥💥 Character Design good💥💥💥💥💥 World Background good💥💥💥💥💥

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Darcksage

Great stuff so far, stable updates everyday. Wish we had more chapters per day but we can only hope. Minimal mistakes, easy to read. Pace wise is a bit fast to my taste but still very good.

7yr
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Snake551g

I can't really say to much since the story had just started. The overall grammar is done well. The mc has pretty much just started his journey so not much to say on that front accept that the set up so far has kept me Interested and I can't lie it's nice to see a more toned down system. Update stability has been good so far so hope to see it stay stable.

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Tomi
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Interesting story, continue updating! Thanks--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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kingxter

is this novel dropped? .... why the author not updating any more???.................. ............................................. ......... ..................... . ........... ....

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Hukague

As a novel military genre fan. I love how the story is currently developing. I agree with how the author use only WW I and WW II equipments and machinery to not make it an overkill if they are using 2019 military technology.

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31Delta
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I believe that all of the qualities are here to make this a 5-star book, however, the main thing that is making this book a 4.6, is the stability of the updates.

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Voidcaller

What is your update schedule? Also great story! Prepare for random gibberish sismsksjsmeksjskskeowsimdd,elslsixjdmr,elwoskxd,elsocmfmeksosoxicmf,slslx

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NeedMoreMilk

the MC has not been mentioned to trained with his mercenary group and thus he keeps on relying on his system perks..he did not even build up his stats but overall the story has a lot of potential and i personally love it to continue because of the world building scene it possess

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parade
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I enjoy the novel very much and I wish the author will post more chapters and update more regularly. We say thank you for your time and energy place into writing this novel and I hope you will continue this novel without stopping it

7yr
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RandomPasserby96

Ok so warning for those that dont like NTR. I personally dont like stories with NTR and didnt know what i was getting into when i started reading this. Anyway yes this story contains NTR so avoid if u dont like. However this novel story wise is awesome so far (better without NTR). Thanks author for the interesting novel.

7yr
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Commissar

Harem, weapons and ***, what else can you ask for? 10/10 ... 11 out of 10 experts recommend it ... best anime of the year ... take 2 pay 1 ... It's a joke, but if it's very good I hope more chapters

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Roarek
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Good idea but poorly executed. Characters are flat as cardboard,interactions are boring,action is boring and MC is the worst of it all. Did read 36 chapters,all that was available and i see no hope for this story.

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Chapter 45: Notice!!! 7 years ago

Volume 0 : Auxiliary Volume

  1. General Info 7 years ago

Volume 1 : Private Army Corps (PAC)

  1. 1
    Chapter 1: Waking Up 7 years ago
  2. 2
    Chapter 2: The Forgotten Voice 7 years ago
  3. 3
    Chapter 3: Recovering 7 years ago
  4. 4
    Chapter 4: Starter Package (1) 7 years ago
  5. 5
    Chapter 5: Starter Package (2) 7 years ago
  6. 6
    Chapter 6: Army Boot Camp 7 years ago
  7. 7
    Chapter 7: First Mission 7 years ago
  8. 8
    Chapter 8: Sanloris 7 years ago
  9. 9
    Chapter 9: Mercenary Guild 7 years ago
  10. 10
    Chapter 10: Crimson Cloud 7 years ago
  11. 11
    Chapter 11: Recruitment 7 years ago
  12. 12
    Chapter 12: First Recruit 7 years ago
  13. 13
    Chapter 13: Mission Complete 7 years ago
  14. 14
    Chapter 14: Celebration 7 years ago
  15. 15
    Chapter 15: Unexpected Moment 7 years ago
  16. 16
    Chapter 16: Unwavering Decision (1) 7 years ago
  17. 17
    Chapter 17: Unwavering Decision (2) 7 years ago
  18. 18
    Chapter 18: Farewell for Now 7 years ago
  19. 19
    Chapter 19: Cursed Sea!? 7 years ago
  20. 20
    Chapter 20: Camp Tour 7 years ago
  21. 21
    Chapter 21: Shooting Range 7 years ago
  22. 22
    Chapter 22: Army Basic Combat Training 7 years ago
  23. 23
    Chapter 23: Something's Coming! 7 years ago
  24. 24
    Chapter 24: Firearms Training 7 years ago
  25. 25
    Chapter 25: End of Training Program 7 years ago
  26. 26
    Chapter 26: Graduation; Relation 7 years ago
  27. 27
    Chapter 27: Mercenary Bands Name 7 years ago
  28. 28
    Chapter 28: Bandit Hunt (1) 7 years ago
  29. 29
    Chapter 29: Bandit Hunt (2) 7 years ago
  30. 30
    Chapter 30: Scolding and Reward 7 years ago
  31. 31
    Chapter 31: Purchasing Privilege Token 7 years ago
  32. 32
    Chapter 32: Patrol Boat Acquired 7 years ago
  33. 33
    Chapter 33: Operating the Patrol Boat and the Gun 7 years ago
  34. 34
    Chapter 34: Arriving and Trusting 7 years ago
  35. 35
    Chapter 35: Spread the Dragon Force Name 7 years ago
  36. 36
    Chapter 36: Latest Weapon 7 years ago
  37. 37
    Chapter 37: Recruiting Again 7 years ago
  38. 38
    Chapter 38: Herbalist? 7 years ago
  39. 39
    Chapter 39: Job? 7 years ago
  40. 40
    Chapter 40: Luztrad Empire 7 years ago
  41. 41
    Chapter 41: Operation Red Hot Express 7 years ago
  42. 42
    Chapter 42: Before the Mission Starts 7 years ago
  43. 43
    Chapter 43: Red Hot Express (1) 7 years ago
  44. 44
    Chapter 44: Red Hot Express (2) 7 years ago
  45. 45
    Notice!!! 7 years ago

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