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Chapter 1: Jinxed(1) ∩(·ω·)∩

Back in the outskirts of the city a young girl with blond hair that was covered in red extensions was walking down the street with a height of 1.8 meters she towered amongst most men in her age group or ever while walking home from her job as a moderator in a gaming cafe.

Which most would find unusual for a beauty such as her she suddenly tripped while only minor she dropped her bag while bending down to pick up she saw her reflection and touched her forehead except from a few wrinkles from stress her skin which was like newly made smooth caramel seemed untouched while continuously Checked her current appearance she reached in her bag noticing her lips were dried she started to apply deep blue lipstick which became purple upon touching her rose red lips.

"Hey girl quickly take this" sounded a voice suddenly from behind which she to distracted by her face to hear but she suddenly felt something hard and pointy poking the bottom half of her dress noticing this a cold chill went down her spineshe thought

(Oh crap it's those molesters my boss told me about,well my foot knows what to do)

She thought and kicked to hit nothing but air.puzzeld she quickly got up and turned around to see who it was and shockingly to no one but her it was a old man who at her first glance seemed gentle until she saw the amulelt and butchers knife in his hand.worried she decided to see what he wanted.

"Excuse me gramps but could you explain why you suddenly have such a sharp objet pointed towards my body at night" pausing from her own wording Shelly stood stiff from embarrassment.

"My lord has chosen you be proud mortal woman" grumbled the old troll faces man.

Not wanting to bet here long she played along with the old man.(so creepy I just wanna go home)

"Okay this mortal shall humbly accept your lord" she said with a stutter yet confidence in her voice.

"Be well then"said old troll face while hanging the amulet in front of her.

Quickly snatching away the amulet without noticing herself getting cut as she was to worried and decided to run away.

After that encounter she continued to run after getting into a crowd she slowed down then decided to continue by briskly walking towards the bus stop while occasionally glancing behind her to make sure the creep didn't follow her home or worse to the showers

"Finally home sweet hovel"Shelly said while looking at the 6 Foot scrap metal building that she lived in after running away from her brothers and parents argument.

Sighing and opening the door she realized It was late when She returned to her home. Not that it mattered, since the place itself was usually darker than the average living space, likely due to the electronic blackout windows she had gotten installed to keep things dim even during the day time.

"I should at least clean this place up" she said while grabbing the empty coke and beer bottle around the house well more like a crappy tool shed from its outer appearance.

Reminiscing back to when she first bought them,The neighbours never did question her line of reasoning when she had been borrowing money for years only to buy curtains , but then again,after someone spotted her talking to herself for eighteen hours they thought it was better for everyone that they didn't.

Returning from her memories she went into the bathroom to use the broken glass she called a mirror.

"I should at least try this on I mean what's the worst that could happen"

{A/N ∩(·ω·)∩ this is jinx cat you just

jinxed yourself fool}

Putting it on she began to notice it intricate craftsmanship to the crimson red gem to the small indigo pearls that accompany it

"wow this is reall well made I guess I can keep this for a more rainier day"

after staring at it for what seemed like hours she decided to take it of but the second her blood dripped on the pearls I abundant crimson red glow came from them as Shelly's body began to be covered in black and indigo hell like fires before pausing out

[Can a Person really call this a Home]

The door slid closed and locked behind her, several small dim light sources flickering to life and illuminating the rather humble living space as an electronic voice recited its usual greeting.It had been this way even before she had replaced her 3 years ago.

The human's reclusive nature and influential position made her the ideal target for this shadowy entity that was now walking in her shoes.

Hanging up her trench coat by the door and placing her footwear beneath it, she proceeded to make her way to the kitchen. Sure, an entity like himself didn't really have to eat in order to sustain herself, but he felt an urge to do so; just another side effect of having absorbed her essence.

He retrieved a brightly coloured rainbow bottle filled with a cool blue springtime tasting caffeinated beverage from the fridge, making his way to the living room and settling down in his usual spot. It took him a moment to get comfortable before she brought up a holo-file on the day's transactions. Her eyes skimmed through the info while she opened the beverage, twisting its cap off and bringing it to her lips. She took a long swig before sighing. Everything was going as planned, and while it was good, it was also incredibly boring... For a god like him but the girl still did not have enough power in her yet to switch back but when she did he is sure to work her to the bone for the three years of hell he promised while tightly grabbing the amulet.

"I don't know she could deal with those sweaty meatbags all day but I can't kill them just yet" he sighed then proceeded to close the Holographic system screen then go to bed

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My friend advice from the first chapter

"You basically need to just put yourself in the reader's shoes a little more and asking for critique is a good step towards that as it helps you spot things that might be obvious to you but not to other people"-S@Sman37


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Jinx cat returns but in all seriousness this won’t be the best story as it has no editing but please tell if you spot any mistakes I missed

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