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One day in Yota's School Five Guys attack in black clothes with superpowers. They want to kill inori. Yota wants to save her. He revealed he has superpowers .
The story spin around Yota and his friends. how they protect Earth from Darklord.
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I don't know what to say but that's a great story. I love the main character and main girl to. Story introduce new power type aptitude power. At last I want to say it's a good story.
Just need to improve your script. Otherwise everything is good.... Gogen babu Its obvious reason to write good thing on good intention... You may need more curiosity to fulfill your aspiration....
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This story was really good. I love this story. The last chapter was really good but I don't understand why they have to you take the story so fast. I hope the author of the story do not end .the story to first.
This story was really great and this story developement is going well. From the first chapter this story going pretty fast but I like it. .......................................
This story is really good .at fast I thought it was a bad story than I realligd it's a great story................................................................ .................
While the story is generic its not horrible. I can see the hype that can be brought with each big moment but when accompanied by shit characters I cant feel any excitement when a time like this comes. The language barrier is massive (If it is a language barrier) and it ruins any chance the story has because of the inability to dive indepth to situations and characters. Its a bummer but I cant judge you for it. The dialouge is unnatural and with constant “he said” and “she said” everything feels like a waste of time. The pace is godspeed and no actions are decribed. You say something like “he pulled out his sword and started attacking everyone and they got scared and ran away”. This isnt interesting. At least try to be in depth. And emojis are used. Why did you decide to do that. This is a piece of literature, not a text message.
Good................. Well done bro .......u r awesome...... Keep it up u done so well.. U can improve character names more and more. In future u can improve a lot. Appreciate.. I am hoping so much
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