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Chapter 3: how it all strated

hi i am trying to write this in author's pov

natasha and victor sat outside the room of rachel as they cannot visit rachel as she is in icu.

natasha : victor why would she commit suicide and reach to this condition

victor : mom , may be she is not eating and only drinking . she will be fine and happy. after recovering i will clear everything

natasha : you people used to fight but never like this

victor : mom that is past .

natasha :she is the only thing i have victor

victor : mom, i have been hiding so many things from you.

natasha : tell me , now itself

victor : mom ,first eat something and i will tell you everything

natasha : no victor , i will not

victor :

mom you will be hurt after you know everything

natasha : ok fine tell me

victor : my father and you made us to meet for first time .

4 years back

authors narration :

victor met rachel for a deal because their parents them to start business although rachel want to start a business but victor was not interested as he was a surgeon but victor s father mr. wilson lee back mailed victor for a fair trade of new hospital for running business for 2 years finally victor had to agree .but natasha and wilson planned a small project if they fail there will be no great loss . rachel was angry because she wanted to deal alone .natasha wanted good relation with wilson for sake of the business.

COFFEE SHOP:

first meeting of rachel and victor .victor is waiting for rachel and rachel came very late .

victor : hello, miss Anderson

( rachel furrowed a eyebrow)

rachel: ok , mr .lee my name is rachel .

victor : victor

rachel : this project is very important for me .i wanted to make it better

victor : not for me

( rachel hates lazy people )

rachel: ok , first of all these are files and there is a meeting at 9:30 am sharp

(

WHILE RACHEL IS SPEAKING . SUDDENLY OUTSIDE OF CAFE THERE IS AN ACCIDENT .THEN VICTOR RAN OUTSIDE AND CALLED AMBULANCE AND SAID RACHEL TO GO BUT SHE LOST CONSCIOUS

)

victor : rachel , get up

VICTOR LOOKING TOWARDS HOSPITAL PEOPLE

victor : take her also

(

VICTOR THINKING ABOUT WHAT REALLY HAPPENED TO RACHEL . HOLDING RACHEL IN HIS ARMS .HE GAVE SUGGESTION TO NURSE TO FIRST AID THE PERSON MET WITH ACCIDENT . AFTER GOING TO HOSPITAL RACHEL GAINED CONSCIOUS

)

rachel: victor what happened

victor : are you fine ?

rachel : yes , i am

victor : go home

rachel : but i have no car .

victor : call taxi

rachel : i can't go , please drop me for today

( RACHEL LOOKING LIKE SHE HAS SEEN SOME GHOST )

victor : ok wait , i have to check the person

rachel: thank you

(

VICTOR DROPPED RACHEL HOME BUT HE WAS CONFUSED SOMETHING IS WRONG WITH RACHEL BUT LEFT THAT POINT)

hey readers what do you think .why did rachel lost conscious . give me your answer instead of comments .

please vote for me

lots of love


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