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Chapter 3: the odd loop

When Jacob got to the corner he followed we're he thought the odd figure went. It was a dark alley but not quite pitch black. He started heading down the alley he been walking for awhile all heard was the tapping of his feet but it did not end he walked for another 30 seconds before a high pitched screech was heard. Jacob covered his ears and fell on his knees. It felt forever in tell the scream ended. He slowly stood up wobbling. He leaned on the brick wall in tell a tapping noise was heard. Jacob looked down the alley and saw a black bony and long figure standing there. it started walking towards him than then a jog leaning forward all the way to a Sprint on all four legs. Jacob had a feeling of extreme danger he turned and ran and ran as fast as hook could Jacob can feel it getting closer and closer the steps getting louder and louder but he kept on running not looking back.

Jacob finally See's a light at the end of the alley he kept going with all his might. until he tripped on a crack. Jacob skid and tumbled . but the dangerous feeling went away Jacob looked around and found himself on the road we're he started the hotel is there and the 7/11. but a few things were different like there was a new building. it was a giant church and the surrounding looked like it went back in time. Jacob pushed him self off the ground he took a good look at the church and saw a new figure it looked like a person wearing a robe but it is thiner then the previous figure. He looked at were the previous figure is supposed to be. That thing was still standing there staring at him. It was very creepy having theses things stare at him. but they didn't move in tell he got to close. the figure wearing the robe would run into the church while the person at the corner would run back into the alley. Jacobs got tired really quickly and decided to sleep in the 7/11.

When he awoke Jacob woke up in his hotel bed he got up a brushed his teeth and washed his face he looked in the mirror and saw the dark blurred figure. Jacob took a swing behind him and another punch but only hit air. There was no one there Jacob turned to the mirror and the figure was an inch from him. Jacob jumped backwards and yelled. But he only found him back in the 7/11 cans and bags were scattered around. Jacob stood up and sat at the counter and started to take deep heavy breathes. He was so freaked out he started talking to him self 'what are those thing, why do they keep attacking me, where am I,am I in hell,what have I done' he kept doing this for a solid minute in tell he calm him self down. he got up and looked at the two figures still standing we're they were since yesterday. He thinks, the sky never changes and is always dim. But he took a deep breath and walked out


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