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Chapter 4: Are those really swords or??

"Da, dadada, dadadada" Murasyl sang a tune out of boredom.

"Can you shut the fuck up?" says Emisyl.

"DA, DADADA!, DADADA!" Murasyl sang louder.

Suddenly, the place was filled with void and Emisyl obtained

Cyborg Eyes for some reason.

[Death to all betrayers] says Emisyl as technological things appear

around him.

However, this is all just Emisyl's hallucination.

He looks so odd on Murasyl's view.

"I don't know what you're doing but if you're having fun then ok"

Murasyl reacts.

Suddenly, they reached Vividleaf Town.

A beautiful town of flowers with an arc as its entrance.

They then saw a young man carrying dual blades.

The man with dual blades also notices them as they seem to look new.

"Hello there!" The man greets the two.

"Hello there fella" says Murasyl.

"Do you know each other?" asks Emisyl.

"Hey what's up!?" asks Murasyl to the man.

"Pretty...cool? heh" the man responds.

"Do you KNOW each other?" Emisyl asks louder as he seemed to be ignored.

"Uhm... no?" says Murasyl.

Emisyl stares at Murasyl.

"Alright, I'm Emisyl" Emisyl introduces himself to the man then

shakes his hand.

"I'm Suin, nice to meet you" says the man.

"You both seemed new here" Suin adds.

"Yeah" says Emisyl.

"We're looking for a place called Forest of Loop. Do you have

any idea?" Emisyl adds with a question.

Suin pauses for a moment and performs a thinking pose.

He then starts looking between the two and talks.

"Yeah, I actually no longer call it loop because I mastered that place"

says Suin.

"Awesome, come with us" a graceful invitation by Emisyl.

"That place is actually boring, its full of weak things" says Suin.

"Weak things?" Murasyl asks with a doubt.

"Yeah, I killed the thing called "Prayerbringer" Suin says confidently.

"Seemed to be a mantis. Pretty easy and got some material thing"

Suin adds.

"Material? like... fragment?" Emisyl asks.

"Yeah, I guess" says Suin.

"Did you keep it though?" Murasyl asks.

"Yep and I wore it as a necklace for a week then tossed it" says Suin.

Murasyl begins sweating.

(What the heck, he tossed it) says Emisyl on his head.

Suddenly, Emisyl slashes Suin with a spear but Suin blocked it.

Suin then connected the block with a push using his arms then lowers

his body and performed a spinning kick.

This dropped Emisyl.

"Hey, no surprise attacks" says Suin after he drops Emisyl.

Murasyl tries to come close but Suin stops him with his blade.

"We traveled from our town to here just to get that and you just tossed it?"

Emisyl speaks.

"I got bored of the necklace, big boy" says Suin.

"Perhaps I could give it back to you once again" Suin adds.

"Where did you toss it?" asks Murasyl.

"From the place where I took it" says Suin then returns his blades

after he saw the authorities and people looking at him.

Suin then pops a cigarette and speaks.

"Sorry, officer" he says on an officer looking at them.

Emisyl continues the conversation.

"That's not tossing, you returned it dumbass" he said.

"You're too cool for someone already on his knees, I respect you for that"

says Suin.

"If I had a gun right now, I'll shoot your face" says Emisyl.

"He'd probably cut it in half like movies" says Murasyl with a chuckle.

"Nah kid, my blades can't cut bullets. This guy wins" says Suin.

"Anyways, let's cool up. If you can pay, I'd get it for you really easy"

Suin offers.

The two had money from their job so they don't seem to care much.

(The money in this place is just called dollars so I will use dollar sign $)

Murasyl hands over $70 while Emisyl hands over $140.

"Why double?" Murasyl asks.

"Just to be sure" says Emisyl.

"No worries, this isn't that small and money is money. I'll be back in

few minutes or an hour" says Suin as he walks away.

(Woah, this guy is tough) Murasyl talks on his head.

(I like this guy's confdence) says Emisyil on his head.

"Wait, sec. You guys would probably walk around so... meet me

on a pub not at this town but at Petalburst Town which is also

on this city" says Suin as he stops walking.

He then continues then stops again.

"Oh, if you don't know what city this is. Its Foerst, F-O-R-S-T"

Suin then continues walking.

"What should we do now?" Murasyl asks.

"Let's go to Petalburst, maybe there's fragment there" says Emisyl.

Few minutes later, Suin finally enters Forest of Loop.

The place's color inverts as he use his ability to perceive reality.

He sees the secret mirror door to enter the special point of

Forest of Loop.

As he go on the first block, a group of spiders ambushed him.

He manually fights them all as they seem easy for him.

He cuts them one by one why swiftly dodging each attack.

He then enters the next block.

Meanwhile. Murasyl and Emisyl sees a tent with a crystal ball logo on its top and proceeds

to enter there.

They saw an old woman.

"Hello granny" Emisyl greets.

"Hello, young man" old woman greets back.

"Why are we here?" asks Murasyl.

Emisyl points his eyes and raises eyebrows at the crystal ball.

Murasyl then raises his eyebrows once.

"Grandma, tell us why we are here" Emisyl asks.

"That's $5" old woman immediately replies.

Emisyl then hands over $5

"That's quite expensive" says Murasyl.

"She could be legit" says Emisyl.

The old woman then starts chanting and the ball starts to light.

"Joomba, Oomba, Ima, Dumba" she chants.

"You are here to ask a question" says the Old woman.

The two paused.

"This is fraud" said Emisyl.

"It isn't" says the old woman.

"Ok then" Emisyl speaks then hands over another $5.

"What's the current state of my life?" Emisyl asks.

"See you will ask a question" says the old woman then proceeds

to chant once again.

"Zoomba, Joomba, Ooga, Booga!" the light of

the crystal ball gets stronger.

"You struggled on life but you're trying your hardest and you're

doing good despite not knowing that you are" says the old woman.

"That's literally everyone" says Murasyl.

"This is fraud, I'm calling the cops" says Emisyl then pulls his phone.

"Hello, 911"

"Hey stop" the old woman interrupts him.

"Alright, I can tell your legitimate answers. I'm old you see, ask me

something" says the old woman.

"What's your name?" Murasyl asks.

"I'm Carmela Diaz" says the old woman.

"Uhm, 911 her name is Carmela" says Emisyl.

"Stop!" Carmela interrupts.

"Don't worry, I'm faking" says Emisyl.

"I have real question, is there anything special on Petalburst town"

he asks.

"That's where I met my husband. He's a lovely man" says Carmela.

"His name is Chito Diaz" she adds.

"Anything special except that?" asks Emisyl.

"Eh?..." Carmela seems confused.

"Like, a temple or something ancient?" says Murasyl.

"Oh!" Carmela catches up.

"There's a nicely engineered cave there that used to be a maze

for lovers until it was bought and the new owner puts weird things inside

them" says the old woman.

"Like my hus-"

"Stop that" Emisyl interrupts Carmela.

"Ok, what's with this maze?" says Emisyl.

"They put up monsters and stuff. The warriors of town can actually

beat them except the boss and they keep on respawning everytime someone

enters the maze" says Carmela.

"We never had a chance to clear the place just to make it useable

by people once again" she adds.

"There's probably a fragment in there" says Murasyl.

"Yes, absolutely" says Emisyl.

"Do you have an idea where to find it on that town?" asks Emisyl.

"It's on the center of the town" says Carmela.

Emisyl then hands over $35.

"Thanks fraud" says Emisyl then leaves.

Murasyl waves nicely then leaves.

Meanwhile, Suin was ambushed by miniboss of the forest but

he blocked all the attacks.

The miniboss then walks in front of him.

It seemed to look like a funky looking and muscular cockroach.

"You again?" he says as he confronts Suin.

"Just give me the key, weakling" says Suin as he performs a battle stance.

The miniboss gulps.

The miniboss explains something out of nowhere while acting acting nervously.

"The boss here just handicaps himself for this is actually military training dungeon" he says.

"Act cool all you want but when boss takes you seriously, you're gone kid" says the miniboss.

Suin just paused and stared at him with a bored look.

The miniboss got more scared by the fact that it didn't even tilt Suin.

"B-by the way, my name is Kakurotchi. I'm supposed to be extremly

fast and slippery but its you so its a different story" the miniboss adds.

"You done?" Suin asks then spins his blades and goes back to his battle stance.

Kakurotchi despite sweating, powered up himself and his wings were flapping furiously.

"I'll do my best this time!" Kakurotchi motivates himself.

Suin then starts to disappear and 6 slashes appear out of nowhere.

Kakurotchi was sliced to shred and Suin catches the last of two keys

with his mouth. (Yes, he got the other key offscreen)

Suin now unlocks the big wooden door and Prayerbringer reveals itself.

"I was just handicapped because I am no harsh for intruders" says

Prayerbringer.

"Yeah, your minion said that" says Suin with a taunting tone.

"Now give me your all, insect" Suin adds.

"Kakurotchi is no match compared to my true power" says Prayerbringer.

"I need a smaller and lighter form to match with your speed or even

exceed it" says Prayerbringer.

Suin poses a stance expecting something different to Prayerbringer.

Suddenly, Prayerbringer turns from mantis into an armored-like man

wearing a mask, has human body and had an arms with fingers.

He then crosses his arms and unleashes his blades.

He uses his scythes as double edged blades from his fist to his shoulders.

"Get ready, human" says Prayerbringer.

Suddenly, he disappears.

He performs a slash on Suin's face but Suin pushed him away by dropping

his blade and doing it with his bare hands.

"Smart move" then prayerbringer disappears again.

"Back attacks inco-" Suin was interrupted by Prayerbringer's quick

gut stab and a kick on his back that dropped him.

Suin then covers his gut to form blood clots.

"Nice" says Suin as he spits blood.

"Don't talk while you're fighting, only me can-" say Prayerbringer then

performs 3 slashes on Suin's front but all of them were blocked.

"Do them?" Prayerbringer continues his dialogue.

"You're good" he adds.

Suin then disappears then reappears on Prayerbringer's back and performs

an upward spin attack.

Suin connects it by throwing his blade but it bounces on Prayerbringer's armor and he catches it.

However, Prayerbringer dodges all of it by lowering his body and performing a sidestep.

Suin then connects it with downward slash with his other blade as he catches the other one but Prayerbringer blocks it.

"Should've done this the first time we met" says Suin.

"Don't worry, you'll never cut me in half and talk shit again" says

Prayerbringer.

Prayerbringer then performs a low spin kick as he lower his body but Suin jumped.

Prayerbringer then unleashes extreme speed and moves on Suin's back

and performs a whirling slash.

Suin felt it and speaks "Rewind"

He suddenly disappears and reappears whirling upwards, cutting Prayerbringer's

wings.

"urk" Prayerbringer felt the pain.

"You don't fly, wings for what?" Suin asks.

"Grr" Prayerbringer slightly loses his cool.

"What just happened!?" Prayerbringer got confused.

He then mindlessly performs quick 7 slashes on Suin but he blocked

them all.

He connects it with downward kick.

The kick hits.

He connects Suin's drop with an incoming stab.

Suin moves Prayerbringer's hands with his toes by moving them upwards.

He then performs a spin kick and dropped Prayerbringer.

Prayerbringer responded by rolling away and performing another

whirling slash.

Suin cuts the other scythe with his sword but got hit by the other whirl

that sliced his chest.

Despite hitting the whirl, Prayerbringer got off balanced and dropped.

"You may wounded me, but can you do that "spinning in the air" thing

again?" asks Suin.

"Guyaaa!" Prayerbringer unleashes a battle cry while spinning like

a tornado with his remaining scythe.

Suin stops it and they both got pushed.

"You spam spin attacks and think you're good" says Suin.

"Pathetic" he adds.

Suin then lights a cigarette.

Prayerbringer finds this as an opportunity and dives quickly.

Before he performs a beheading slash, Suin drops his cigarette and lighter

then speaks "Rewind"

He then disappears and returned to the position where he slashed

Prayerbringer's other scythe.

As Prayerbringer looks, he disappears again and continues lighting his

cigarette.

Prayerbringer smelled a stench of cigarette in the air.

Suddenly, Suin's blades stabbed his left and right stomach in cross

pattern.

Suin then connects it by slicing him in half and going forward with

a speed.

"You're good" he says as he as he pauses and Prayerbringer's body slowly falls.

"But I'm better" he adds after Prayerbringer's body finally hits the ground.

Prayerbringer.

As usual, he sees Prayerbringer respawn.

He slowly walks in and quickly dashes for an attempt to behead

Prayerbringer.

"Don't dare to do another fight" says Prayerbringer.

"I can kill you all day" says Suin.

Suddenly, Suin's bleed worsens and he starts puking blood that his cigarette

got drenched with it.

"Not with those wounds" says Prayerbringer.

Suin then drops his blood as he loses adrenaline and realized his wounds.

"I'll heal your lethal wounds" says Prayerbringer.

Prayerbringer then puts his scythe on head of Suin.

"Ah yeah, a kill opportunity" says Suin as he breathes.

"Shut up, kid" says Prayerbringer.

Prayerbringer then starts transfering energy to Suin and heals his

lethal deep wounds but still leaves his clothes ripped.

Suin then stands up.

"Well... thanks for that" says Suin.

"You're welcome" says Prayerbringer.

Suddenly a smoke trail appears in a distance as if a fast thing is coming.

Kakurotchi appears and immediately confronts Suin.

"Leave please, for God's sake" he says.

"Don't worry I will, insect" says Suin as he slowly walks away and aims for the fragment room.

Kakurotchi and Prayerbringer just looked at him.

Prayerbringer stopped looking first and walks away.

"Cocky boy" Prayerbringer whispers as he disappears.

Suin then picks up the Fragment once again and used it as a necklace.

There was a small reflection on the room and he sees himself.

He thinks it really looks so bad at him so he just decided to put it on his pocket.

Meanwhile, the two finally arrives to Petalburst town.


CREATORS' THOUGHTS
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Suin's Ability for this chapter :

Rewind - Returns to his state few seconds or minutes ago depending on how he wants it and does the same action.

Kakurotchi looks like a buff and bald funny looking man wearing a cockroach costume.

He moves way too fast but it felt different when against Suin.

Prayerbringer is simply a giant praying mantis that moves so fast.

He can transform into assassin-like hood and mask bug-humanoid and does better than his mantis form.

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