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-Don't Read This Story! You will likely regret it.
-Don't read this if you're looking for something good, this is a below-average story, written by a below-average writer that many find hard to understand from lack of clarity.
-The Mc is terrible, the characters are terrible, the ideas are terrible, the pacing is terrible, the harem is terrible.
-This is not the marvel story you're looking for. It's not even in the MCU yet after so long, and may never be with how slow it is.
-This is a wish-fulfillment story that is in the MCU universe and will follow the MCU in my own way. The goal is to blend my story in and around the MCU.
-Be warned I'm a below-average writer, I need to work on my details and wording, and probably everything else. Expect quality fluctuations.
-This will have a harem since my last story didn't have one. --Expect badly written lemon scenes. They will be marked for an easy skip for those who don't want to read it. If you can handle all that, then welcome aboard.
-The Asgardian Theoric is about to get a second chance. [[[ https://marvel.fandom.com/wiki/Theoric_(Earth-616) ]]]
-The story starts before the MCU where he will grow his abilities on his way to becoming indomitable.
-1st volume: Prologue
-2nd volume: Troll War - (ch.12-59)
-3rd volume: Hidden Forces - (ch. 60-194)
-4th volume: Olympians
-5th volume: Mutants
-6th volume: MCU
-7th volume: Darkness
-8th volume: Epilogue
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To help answer some questions people might have.
-This is a fanfic, don't expect everything to be super accurate to marvel canon or history in general. I'm taking the info provided that's already been established and turning into a story of my own making.
- No kingdom-building,
- The beginning of the story puts a lot of people off because I didn't go the normal route people would like, and they don't tend to like the troll arc. The next arc also starts a slow tedious writing style that needs much work and improvement.
- He also starts a little rash and seems a little weak because his powers easily drain him, some of this is explained later though and fixed by Gaea, but many miss this and only concentrate on the fact that he isn't being and doing what they think he should.
- I should also explain that he has some memories that were locked away and then deleted because of his rashness. This was simply a way to end the whole locked memory thing, the Acanti soul was a plot point to give him future memories of the MCU, beyond that it served no more purpose so I got rid of all the other useless knowledge, He was in no way nerfed as some would like to believe.
- I made him a little more emotional than I would like at the beginning, it was my attempt at trying to give him a personality after being criticized for the lack thereof in my last story.
- Ruthless? I don't think so, I'm going more the route of a fair Mc. He'll do more of an eye for an eye type stuff, gender does not matter to him when it comes to this.
- While the harem isn't the end all be all goal, it's true that he is going around getting women.
- I do have a story beyond the harem though and will not focus too heavily on the harem beyond the obvious. Mostly he just goes around sleeping with them and beyond that is anyone's guess whether they stick around or not, I do try and make it feel a little more real, but it is a harem.
- Basically a harem with a progressing story.
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-I have also posted this story on Royal Road and Wattpad.
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Keep it up man your doing great with this novel so far.๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
I was going to save this and start reading it when he gets to the start of the MCU. But 146 chapters and it's only in Vol.3. The MCU parts start at Vol.6. I was like okay I can still wait. That was till I saw he hasn't posted a chapter in 2 months so....that's probably not going to happen. IDK but it's probably dropped.
What can i say, young people won't understand and internet karens will hate it. This story has a very solid comics background as the mc theoric, his wife, acanti, rock trolls, ughh almost everythibg follow's comic book lore and a great plot twist of acanti, really a breath of fresh air in marvel fanfic, The grammar's great, character introductions are really good and damn man introducing character's not often seen in ff, and even in the comics lol. Kudos to you for this amazing ff, and also hope you finish this book and don't mind the karens you are doing and amazing job.
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This is one of my favorite novels of all time. I have already read it two times and I am considering doing it again. I have noticed the author has been slightly less enthusiastic about writing the story and I hope this comment openes his eyes to all the people who love and have been affected by his story.
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Great story But i would love some more of dem chapters tho๐ง๐ง๐ง๐ง๐ง๐ง๐ง๐ง๐ง๐ง๐ง๐ง๐ง๐ง๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ง๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐คซ๐คซ๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ง๐ง๐ง๐ค
Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem?
I feel bad for the author feel bad ๐ for the author, heโs put so much fucking work into this FanFic but itโs barely appreciated. Vote ๐ณ for him with your magic stones!
A good novel and a new take on the marvel universe, awesome characters and good power balance ,makes the mc to be just right, not too op but not too weak either
Honestly it started out decent and thought the story would pick up but it just stayed in this arc that was the entire novel so far.... I was going t9 make a review to tell people when to skip but so far at chapter 59 it just ended lol so if you start reading and want to skip that arc or speed read whatever then it has to be after that chapter