Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I feel really relaxed for some reason. This feeling of floating on air, or maybe on a cloud, I can't really tell. I turn to my side happily, praising the god clouds for such a good mattress. As I'm turning though a sharp sting goes through my head. OUCH... I quickly open my eyes and look at the rock my head just bounced off of, feeling a little blood trickle into my eye.
"What the hell", I mutter. I look around wondering where I'm at, seeing a weird cavern, with some undergrowth here and there. I look up to see how tall the cavern is, and from what I can determine, it's huge. Maybe 30 meters or so. Hard to tell cause it's a little dark.
I decide to worry about that in a minute to check myself out, being that I did just die and this shouldn't be possible. Staring at my own breasts, I don't see a scar or anything. No hole, or a single scratch. I also note that my breasts seem bigger, like at least D cup. My skin is also different, silky and creamy looking. I stand up to get better bearings, and fully look at myself. My legs are pretty lean and strong, and my stomach is hard with muscle. I didn't know I could have an 8 pack. And I look further down and smirk. No hair covering my pussy obviously. Means no upkeep I hope. "Hahaha, this is weird but awesome". I look at my arms this time and see the definition to them. Holy cow, I look great. From what I can tell with my figure, I have curves and muscle in all the right places. I also notate that I'm taller than I used to be, going from 5"3 to 5"7 at least. And my hair is also longer, and a different color. It hangs to my waist and is a pure black color. Interesting indeed.
I idly think about my face now, and the fact that I'm naked. I wonder what I actually look like. I look around to see if there are any reflective surfaces around, and I spot a shield. Hm, I wonder what that is doing there. I shrug to myself and walk to it. When I get there I squat down and peer into the reflection.
The first thing I noticed were the eyes... "What in the world." I look into my eyes and see a brilliant gold color. Before I had eyes of pure obsidian, and even my hair was red. This is truly strange to look at, but damn, I'm gorgeous. Like, I was beautiful before, but now I'm down right exotic, and extremely beautiful. So much so that it's alluring. "If this wasn't my body now, I'd seriously try to get you in bed," I say to my reflection. My check bones are a little sharper, as are my eyes. and my nose is perfect as well, sitting in a way to accentuate my features. A strong chin, but in a pleasing way, and my ears. They are pointed a bit, going back about 2 inches. Am I an elf or something?
All of a sudden I hear something. I look left and right, behind and up. Hm, what was that. It sort of reminded me of a soft scratching noise.
"Growwwwl".
"What"? I jump around looking for the source. And then I see it, standing next to the rock I hit my head on. It was a beautiful beast of some sort. I'd say a wolf, but this thing is a bit bigger. It was licking my blood off of the rock, while looking at me. I back up a bit, frightened by this beast. I'm not much of a fighter, so I start thinking of a way to run, when all of a sudden I feel a cold sensation crawl up my spine. I want to turn but all of a sudden my body reacts without me thinking about it, my hand swiping up as I drop down. I look up and see a wolf laying in front of me, split in half. I stare at it, shocked, wondering what happened. I look at my hand, and oh boy, those are some extremely cool claws... wait a minute. "What the f***"?
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Shane_Dalton This chapter is a little on the, where am I and what happened side. Then a little cliff hanger. I guess I could drop 5 or 6 chapters a day if I wanted but I know that running through a story instead of a little planning is how more mistakes are made. So I think 1 to 3 chapters a day will be doable. I'm going to stop at 2 for the day though unless I get bored. And again, pointers and thoughts would help if you don't mind, so I can plan ahead a bit for a more exciting story.
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