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In Gaia, magic has been studied for centuries by every civilization there is. With several divergent "paths" of study,
scientists test the limits of mana to find ways to bring prosperity and war to the continent. In the mainland, Anton and his brother Frank are finally admitted to Astra Magic University, and they depart, leaving behind their old ruined lives.
However, amidst his studies, the boy genius discovers a new path of wizardry to study: Chronomancy.
Follow the story of Anton as he deepens himself into this brand new area of magic, and discovers a secret that might just put his life, and of all others he know, at risk.
Weekly releases every Friday, expect long and exciting chapters.
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3.8/5. The grammar isn't bad, but it can have some improvement. There's no need for commas after certain words. For example, in the beginning it says somewhere along the lines of, "Laid on the (something), was an unconscious boy." There is no need for the comma before was. Think of the sentence in your head, replacing the comma with a pause and see if it makes sense. There's also the fact that it's highly unlikely for time magic not to have been discovered yet. I won't delve too deeply into that, though. Also, you seem to use asterisks (*) instead of apostrophes ('). I don't know if it's a design choice, but it gets rather annoying. I usually only see those in poorly written fanfictions on AO3 and FF. I'd change it ASAP. Won't comment on the plot until the story progresses to at least chapter 50.
Cmon, i'm the creator. I think I write good. Please read it! I put a lot of time and work into the world, the story and the characters! I promise a story that will blast your brain off!