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"a knight can be strong; a knight can be skilful; a knight can be smart but what truly makes a knight is someone who can walk onto the battlefield passing by the bodies of their comrades and ready their sword for an unbeatable army raging towards them." the knight shouted as the boy unsheathed their sword and ran with all their might towards their death
"so fight on, fight until your body is about to break into a thousand pieces and keep on fighting! and when you face your last breath, draw on all your strength and endure because we do fight to fight but to see their faces once more is what it means to be a knight" the knight said as he watched the boy fall to his knees surrounded by the bodies of his enemies.
"I... I need to get up but I took all their lives." the boy cried out to break the silence of the dead
"and when you realise what you have to give up to protect those who you live stand up and give a reason to their deaths," the knight said picking the boy up and walking away from the battlefield.
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Write a reviewI personally say is hard hahaha I will answer your title hahahha I will share my grandpa experience comparing it cause his a soldier military and in his stead i hard but satisfying he died 2019 and Im so glad that you made this kind of story this bring back the memories of my grandpa as a soldier thank youu
Reveal SpoilerA valiant effort. Since only you can know how to improve your story, I'll leave some tips instead. I suggest that you at least run your chapters through Grammarly before posting. It's free, and it'll vastly improve the quality of your writing. Prose-wise, dialogue from different people shouldn't be in the same paragraph for easy reading. Lastly, adding a bit more colorful descriptors would make your scenes pop out. Make your characters move while they're speaking to show more personality in them. That's it, I think. Keep on writing👍
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Hey author one small advise keep your paragraphs less lengthy so that readers can give comments.. Also check on capitals at the start of a para.. Over all its a nice experience to read a story involved in knight world..
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The reason why I read this book is because, I want to understand more about what knight is thinking. I wamt to write about sword and magic, fantasy world, and the like. I think the characters interaction is lively. But, to increase the exposure, I recommend you to add more popular tags and make the synopsis tell more us more about the story. Overall, I think the story is good.